Ethereal Echoes
They're always there...24 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
Fifteen blooming syllables, encapsulated within eleven well chosen words which perfectly and structurally set and fixed have created a poetical gem since its alliterative ethereal title which only a Muse could have given birth to. A Great Winning writing prompt.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Fifteen blooming syllables, encapsulated within eleven well chosen words which perfectly and structurally set and fixed have created a poetical gem since its alliterative ethereal title which only a Muse could have given birth to. A Great Winning writing prompt.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Wow, Tony!! :) I'm so sorry I'm belated in thanking you for this awesome, shining-star review - but I'm looking at getting myself back on track this week (hopefully!).... so good to hear from you as always! ;) Just waiting on the husband to finish up his garage so we can put the house on the market! Take care of you over there! :) Yvette
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
This is really nice!
The presentation of your poem is beautiful and compliment your words so well.
Great imagery that many will be able to relate to (but insomniacs will only be able to imagine!)
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Hello :)
This is really nice!
The presentation of your poem is beautiful and compliment your words so well.
Great imagery that many will be able to relate to (but insomniacs will only be able to imagine!)
Good luck in the voting booth. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely title as well as a poem that gives us that feeling just before falling asleep. Great word choices starting with "whispered dreams" leading to sleep. Great illustration, too! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Lovely title as well as a poem that gives us that feeling just before falling asleep. Great word choices starting with "whispered dreams" leading to sleep. Great illustration, too! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from palmart
Lovely image: great choice!!! And wording invites to the "World of Dreams" with economy of words. Great combination of both sides, nice to eye and mind!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Lovely image: great choice!!! And wording invites to the "World of Dreams" with economy of words. Great combination of both sides, nice to eye and mind!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your alliteration serves as very strong onomatopoeia. The s's especially effect the quietude and hushing. This would be a nice chant to helps someone fall asleep. I like it. I am voting for this one.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Your alliteration serves as very strong onomatopoeia. The s's especially effect the quietude and hushing. This would be a nice chant to helps someone fall asleep. I like it. I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from June Sargent
I love the imagery captured in whispered dreams that just drift in and out of our consciousness - always there to remind us not to give up our hopes and dreams.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I love the imagery captured in whispered dreams that just drift in and out of our consciousness - always there to remind us not to give up our hopes and dreams.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow! What imagery! This is simply gorgeous, my friend, and actually on the mark as far as the actual event, at least in my experience... I imagine this should do very well in the contest!!!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Wow! What imagery! This is simply gorgeous, my friend, and actually on the mark as far as the actual event, at least in my experience... I imagine this should do very well in the contest!!!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from harmony13
The words of this poem are engaging, peaceful, clear and creative.
I found this words to be so true. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is perfect and compliments these words.
Hope you are having a great day!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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The words of this poem are engaging, peaceful, clear and creative.
I found this words to be so true. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is perfect and compliments these words.
Hope you are having a great day!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from poetwatch
I dream so I must be, falling asleep or in a world of fantasy. Good choice of picture for the journey 'beckoning the mind to sleep" sailing into slumberland, author. :) This is a very good entry for the 3-5-7 Poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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I dream so I must be, falling asleep or in a world of fantasy. Good choice of picture for the journey 'beckoning the mind to sleep" sailing into slumberland, author. :) This is a very good entry for the 3-5-7 Poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Jose!!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a good, short, easy to understand poem entry for the 3-5-7 writing prompt. I feel that it should do well in the contest, so I wish you great good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This is a good, short, easy to understand poem entry for the 3-5-7 writing prompt. I feel that it should do well in the contest, so I wish you great good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Rebecca!!
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You're welcome.
