My God
How my faith in God helps me.16 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Heartfelt--perfect title for the theme--I sought this out because you just mentioned that it got recognized! Cheers. LIZ
(ere s/b e'er--ere means before-- e'er is ever)
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Heartfelt--perfect title for the theme--I sought this out because you just mentioned that it got recognized! Cheers. LIZ
(ere s/b e'er--ere means before-- e'er is ever)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thanks. I will make the correction.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"My God", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Woven through each line of this talented poet's work are the golden threads of truth. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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"My God", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Woven through each line of this talented poet's work are the golden threads of truth. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for reading. Also, thank you for the wonderful rating and comments. I am so glad that you enjoyed my work.
You're very welcome, and certainly deserved the rating and comments,
God bless, take care and keep sharing!
the Duchess
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your rhyming couplets. The rhymes are good, there is good flow, and the imagery and emtional feel is great. Your lines read smooth with a great message, too.
Thanks for sharing your faith.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed your rhyming couplets. The rhymes are good, there is good flow, and the imagery and emtional feel is great. Your lines read smooth with a great message, too.
Thanks for sharing your faith.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Jan, for reading and reviewing. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from mauial
Nice declaration of faith. This part is always true: He has been a constant friend
And will remain so 'til the end. He never abandons us its the other way around.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Nice declaration of faith. This part is always true: He has been a constant friend
And will remain so 'til the end. He never abandons us its the other way around.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Definitely. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Well done submission for the My Faith poetry contest. It is wonderful to read the words of someone who truly believes and is not afraid to tell others.
The picture that you chose is the perfect match to your words.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Well done submission for the My Faith poetry contest. It is wonderful to read the words of someone who truly believes and is not afraid to tell others.
The picture that you chose is the perfect match to your words.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from mermaids
You have created an excellent faith based poem. Your two lines verses are smooth and your rhyming of words adds to the strength of your poem. "He is my strength, my hope, my light" is my favorite line, it shows faith and evokes a happy feeling.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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You have created an excellent faith based poem. Your two lines verses are smooth and your rhyming of words adds to the strength of your poem. "He is my strength, my hope, my light" is my favorite line, it shows faith and evokes a happy feeling.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm very glad that you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your spiritual poem in these rhymed couplets. Your faith is clearly conveyed, and the artwork you selected reinforces your feelings. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you for sharing your spiritual poem in these rhymed couplets. Your faith is clearly conveyed, and the artwork you selected reinforces your feelings. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Putting Him first and trusting Him fully are prerequisites to lasting peace and joy. Your couplets are well-written, appealing, uplifting, and deeply spiritual.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Putting Him first and trusting Him fully are prerequisites to lasting peace and joy. Your couplets are well-written, appealing, uplifting, and deeply spiritual.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
My God
by Monica Chaddick
Hello, Monica,
Nice entry for the My Faith contest. I like the Rhyming... it's pretty good. Good presentation. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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My God
by Monica Chaddick
Hello, Monica,
Nice entry for the My Faith contest. I like the Rhyming... it's pretty good. Good presentation. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you for reading, reviewing, and for the well wishes.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about faith in the God you know as can Merciful and gracious God who carries you through the heart times and who are always there for you when you need Him.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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A very well-written poem about faith in the God you know as can Merciful and gracious God who carries you through the heart times and who are always there for you when you need Him.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
