A True Monster
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Comment from TommyWrites
Okay...I should not have laughed at this...but I did. Because it's true. XD
Despite that, it's actaully a really good poem. The rhymes are nice, it flows great, and is enjoyable even though it's about her. :) Oh, and great picture!
Good luck in the contest!
TommyWrites~
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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Okay...I should not have laughed at this...but I did. Because it's true. XD
Despite that, it's actaully a really good poem. The rhymes are nice, it flows great, and is enjoyable even though it's about her. :) Oh, and great picture!
Good luck in the contest!
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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thank you very much for your positive response and very nice comments!
Comment from aryr
You have captured her perfectly, well done. She definitely lies, avoids the truth, defends what she believes in and simply cares about her political status.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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You have captured her perfectly, well done. She definitely lies, avoids the truth, defends what she believes in and simply cares about her political status.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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that, she does.
many thanks!
Comment from Cycler
You've expressed your opinion quite vibrantly and with lots of color. Not much left in your head about what you are attempting to say. The picture is ugly, the color of Satan (i assume). You've created a post that will be offensive to some and lauded by others - which is truly in the spirit of the monster contest.
Nice work. And good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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You've expressed your opinion quite vibrantly and with lots of color. Not much left in your head about what you are attempting to say. The picture is ugly, the color of Satan (i assume). You've created a post that will be offensive to some and lauded by others - which is truly in the spirit of the monster contest.
Nice work. And good luck.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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thank you for your tactful and impartial comments! I'm afraid when I get really angry, my fingers attack the computer with vigor and "I calls them as I sees them." ( should have made it a two-headed monster and added Maxine Waters.)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a monster and this lady portrayed in the poem seems to had esxaped from the pits of hell to bring it to earth so that we can see what it looks like over there.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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A very well-written poem about a monster and this lady portrayed in the poem seems to had esxaped from the pits of hell to bring it to earth so that we can see what it looks like over there.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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and I wish Hell would take her back! thanks, Sandra, for reading and for your comments.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A True Monster, sends out little love for the Speaker of the House of Representatives, Nancy Pelosi. Nice picture as well.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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This poem, A True Monster, sends out little love for the Speaker of the House of Representatives, Nancy Pelosi. Nice picture as well.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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one reader said I should've included maxine Waters - a two-headed monster
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You have nicely portrayed a real and live monster in today's state of living, telling about dismantling nature of the monster; well said, thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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You have nicely portrayed a real and live monster in today's state of living, telling about dismantling nature of the monster; well said, thank you for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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thank you, sir.
much appreciated.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The message here is very clear
the form/structure is poetic
the POV is political
the voice/tone could be very trying
the rhyming is first/third; second, fourth
the grammar is excellent
the rhythm sure has a beat
conclusion is so political that I cannot make a comment. I am an independent voter.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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The message here is very clear
the form/structure is poetic
the POV is political
the voice/tone could be very trying
the rhyming is first/third; second, fourth
the grammar is excellent
the rhythm sure has a beat
conclusion is so political that I cannot make a comment. I am an independent voter.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Independent voter means? Does an independent voter want total government control and no police protection, no right to defend yourself, fear of saying something aloud for being attacked, or getting fired? Becoming a socialized country? Or freedom to say and do what you please within the law.? Our President truly loves this country, has no ax to grind, isn't beholden to anyone, and only wants to do what's best for all it's citizens.
I appreciate your reading my poem. Yes, it's political and I stand by it.
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thank you for clarifying
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I know one thing; our country is divided; very sad to see this happening.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
If I had a way, I'd send this to Pelosi. It is a picture perfect reference to the number one American Bitch. It would have been even more appropriate
to send a similar letter to Maxine Waters.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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If I had a way, I'd send this to Pelosi. It is a picture perfect reference to the number one American Bitch. It would have been even more appropriate
to send a similar letter to Maxine Waters.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you, sir! Why don't you write that one? :)
I'll give YOU a 6!
Comment from MissMerri
An excellent descriptive poem, though what struck me more than the slant of your words, was the courage of your convictions. This was rather amazing to read, and I hope you have safe walls built around your house! The picture is terrifying!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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An excellent descriptive poem, though what struck me more than the slant of your words, was the courage of your convictions. This was rather amazing to read, and I hope you have safe walls built around your house! The picture is terrifying!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Sometimes disgust and anger get the better of me and when the opportunity presented itself, I succumbed. One guy responded that I should have included Maxine Waters. I could've made a two-headed monster. WISH I'd thought of that.
Thanks for your comments. Only weapon I have is a can of wasp spray! Supposed to shoot 20 feet!
