The Fishing Trip
Stop Story Contest Entry7 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! :) Love it - a great and wonderful offering for this contest - I expect it should do well, mystery author! Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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LOL!! :) Love it - a great and wonderful offering for this contest - I expect it should do well, mystery author! Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Yvette. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
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Ron
Comment from sibhus
Ha, ha this was really good, and so real. I'll have to admit that I'm guilty of this as well. A well written piece with good flow, and the dialogue is very authentic. It makes for excellent entry to the contest, and good luck.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Ha, ha this was really good, and so real. I'll have to admit that I'm guilty of this as well. A well written piece with good flow, and the dialogue is very authentic. It makes for excellent entry to the contest, and good luck.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Yes, we're all guilty of it. Lol. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, sibhus. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from lynglyng
Very well written. Great character building . Good story telling. Very cute part about checking the contest vote. You gave very descriptive details . I was on the lake in the boat with in the boat with you. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Very well written. Great character building . Good story telling. Very cute part about checking the contest vote. You gave very descriptive details . I was on the lake in the boat with in the boat with you. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Lynglyng. I know how much I keep checking when I'm in a contest so I just had embellished on it a bit. Lol I really appreciate the gracious rating, L. I'm glad you liked my little tale. Thank you again. Have yourself a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet.. I gave you your first vote!
I started writing only two years ago ..
...nevertheless I have notice with regret that in this short period I have become quite addicted to the site especially when I have an entry running in the booth.
...writing and posting on fanstory is a great way to pass one's free time during the long cold winter period...
What I'm not too happy about is the amount of time I dedicate to the site during Spring and Summer when I should instead be out enjoying the fresh air, walking etc.
I' m trying to make the necessary changes .. I don't want to be a Joey anymore!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Ciao mystery poet.. I gave you your first vote!
I started writing only two years ago ..
...nevertheless I have notice with regret that in this short period I have become quite addicted to the site especially when I have an entry running in the booth.
...writing and posting on fanstory is a great way to pass one's free time during the long cold winter period...
What I'm not too happy about is the amount of time I dedicate to the site during Spring and Summer when I should instead be out enjoying the fresh air, walking etc.
I' m trying to make the necessary changes .. I don't want to be a Joey anymore!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and support, tempeste. Yes, we all tend to pass a lot of time on here. Especially when we have something in the booth. Haha. I'm glad you liked my little story. Thank you again.
Ron
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a good entry for the Stop writing prompt. I enjoyed it from beginning to the end. It should do well in the contest. Best of luck to you!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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This is a good entry for the Stop writing prompt. I enjoyed it from beginning to the end. It should do well in the contest. Best of luck to you!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Rebecca. I'm glad you liked my little story. I hope you have a great day.
Ron
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You're welcome.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightful--sly snark re stupid site contests (not fanstory's, of course--better clarify in footnote less you be disqualified by disgruntled judges!)
Cheers. LIZ (reword: putting in my new kitchen to remodeling my kitchen)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Delightful--sly snark re stupid site contests (not fanstory's, of course--better clarify in footnote less you be disqualified by disgruntled judges!)
Cheers. LIZ (reword: putting in my new kitchen to remodeling my kitchen)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the great review and suggestion, Liz. I changed it to remodeling. I appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightful--sly snark re stupid site contests (not fanstory's, of course--better clarify in footnote less you be disqualified by disgruntled judges!)
Cheers. LIZ (reword: putting in my new kitchen to remodeling my kitchen)
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Delightful--sly snark re stupid site contests (not fanstory's, of course--better clarify in footnote less you be disqualified by disgruntled judges!)
Cheers. LIZ (reword: putting in my new kitchen to remodeling my kitchen)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
