Summer Sunrise
Reprieve is but a foolish notion...26 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
This current heat wave is most uncomfortable! We're used to cooler weather here in the Northeast. It's grip is annoying and I'd like a break soon. You've captured its stubbornness perfectly.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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This current heat wave is most uncomfortable! We're used to cooler weather here in the Northeast. It's grip is annoying and I'd like a break soon. You've captured its stubbornness perfectly.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Oh, yeah -- it's pretty stifling by afternoon down here, my lady!! ;) Thanx for stopping in on this one, June, and you enjoy the day up there!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
Are you, perchance, in Toronto? (Hahahaha!) This lovely poem describes perfectly what is going on in my neck of the woods, and has been for more than two weeks. GAH!
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Are you, perchance, in Toronto? (Hahahaha!) This lovely poem describes perfectly what is going on in my neck of the woods, and has been for more than two weeks. GAH!
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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LOL!! Yeah, if you think Toronto's bad, try middle Alabama... it's H0-0-0-T and HU-U-U-U-MID! ;) :) Thanx for stopping in for the review, Lady Dawn - hope Miss Priss is continuing to improve and gets back to here ornery self soon! ;) :) Yvette
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Hahahaha! I just posted an update. :)
Comment from harmony13
I love the artwork is I can in vision the heat! The author's words are clear,
descriptive and creative. I thought about the heat in Florida and how
it doesn't compare to other parts of the USA. The poem flows and
connects well. Hi Yvette, hope you are having a great day!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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I love the artwork is I can in vision the heat! The author's words are clear,
descriptive and creative. I thought about the heat in Florida and how
it doesn't compare to other parts of the USA. The poem flows and
connects well. Hi Yvette, hope you are having a great day!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Hey, Maria! Thanx so much for the review on this shortie, my lady - always so good to hear from you over here! You be sure to have a great week out there and take care of you and yours! ;) Yvette
Comment from ameen786
Once again my friend, I am positive that this brilliant poem should have topped the list; wonder how they decide in these contests? Thank you for another picture perfect, alliteration loaded, creative verse with vivid imagery.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Once again my friend, I am positive that this brilliant poem should have topped the list; wonder how they decide in these contests? Thank you for another picture perfect, alliteration loaded, creative verse with vivid imagery.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Wow - Kamran!! This is such a wonderful surprise this morning!! Thank you so very much for both the stars and your awesome review, sir -- you've started my day and the rest of the week off on a great note!! :) ;) These contests are voted on by the members [you can vote at any time on any of them... even set it up so that you get a message when a new contest field is posted. ;)] so many times it seems to come down to the topic addressed rather than the writing... but the mechanics are definitely the same for all of them since 'a committee' does decide if the contest requirements are met. :) ;) But you are SO AWESOME for your compliment here... I am humbled with your words and sentiments... :)
Been kinda 'out more than in' with getting the house ready for market, but it looks like I'm down to just tiny details and waiting on the husband to finish the garage, so I should be able to find a little time now even with 'school' starting back soon. [whole 'nother ball of wax there - weirdness and changes all 'round!]
Take care of you out there and have a great remainder of the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Cindy Decker
This is an excellent 5 - 7 -9 poem. I love the images your poem gives me.
The silhouettes shimmering, and a forecast of a hot, sometimes unbearable summer's day. Very good work. Good luck in all your writing endeavors.
Blessings,
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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This is an excellent 5 - 7 -9 poem. I love the images your poem gives me.
The silhouettes shimmering, and a forecast of a hot, sometimes unbearable summer's day. Very good work. Good luck in all your writing endeavors.
Blessings,
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your review. Stay cool!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Such beauty at dawn bringing us news of another summer's day of heat and presenting a feast of light and glory to give us for another day and night. A beautiful photo with words to match.
Ralf
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Such beauty at dawn bringing us news of another summer's day of heat and presenting a feast of light and glory to give us for another day and night. A beautiful photo with words to match.
Ralf
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your review. Stay cool!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a lovely poem - silhouettes shimmering held the day - I just love the dynamic of this image. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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What a lovely poem - silhouettes shimmering held the day - I just love the dynamic of this image. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your review. Stay cool!
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, "Herald heat's stubborn hold on the day" a wonderful finishing line that captures your artwork and first two lines, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Excellent, "Herald heat's stubborn hold on the day" a wonderful finishing line that captures your artwork and first two lines, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your review. Stay cool!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a short, easy to read and understand poem. It should do well in the 5-7-9 writing prompt. I enjoyed it, and I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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This is a short, easy to read and understand poem. It should do well in the 5-7-9 writing prompt. I enjoyed it, and I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your review. Stay cool!
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I will!
Comment from lyenochka
Love the poetry of this short poem! Great use of alliteration of 's' words and 'h' words. Perfect picture to illustrate the "silhouettes of dawn." Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Love the poetry of this short poem! Great use of alliteration of 's' words and 'h' words. Perfect picture to illustrate the "silhouettes of dawn." Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your review. Stay cool!