Faith over fear
5/7/9 poem7 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a short, easy to read and understand poem. It should do well in the 5-7-9 writing prompt. I enjoyed it, and I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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This is a short, easy to read and understand poem. It should do well in the 5-7-9 writing prompt. I enjoyed it, and I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Hello Rebecca and thank you for your time and wonderful review; glad you like the write.
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You're welcome.
Comment from mauial
Interesting point of view. I like the alliteration of pandemic paranoia. But don't agree it is paranoia as the bodies keep piling up. Intetesting comparison of those who complain they can't breathe becauses of a mask to the George Floyd event.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Interesting point of view. I like the alliteration of pandemic paranoia. But don't agree it is paranoia as the bodies keep piling up. Intetesting comparison of those who complain they can't breathe becauses of a mask to the George Floyd event.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Hello friend, I appreciate your time and the insights, thank you very much.
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. It is well received with it's positive message about the Covid Pandemic. Every word of your poem is meaningful and inspiring. Your artwork choice is beautiful and spiritual. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. It is well received with it's positive message about the Covid Pandemic. Every word of your poem is meaningful and inspiring. Your artwork choice is beautiful and spiritual. Best wishes!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Hello friend, I appreciate your visit and am pleased that you like the poem; thank you very much.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A reminder that the FDR was right: the greatest fear we have is fear itself... A wonderful offering for the 5-7-9 - thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :) :)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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A reminder that the FDR was right: the greatest fear we have is fear itself... A wonderful offering for the 5-7-9 - thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :) :)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Yvette my friend, I thank you for your time and so glad you like the write; please take care.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very well worded 5-7-9 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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This is a very well written and very well worded 5-7-9 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Hello Teri and thank you kindly for the review; I am pleased that you like the write.
Comment from The Death
You highlighted two different social issues in one-go here. Fine use of P alliteration as well. An ellipsis would acts a better pause(and dramatic, too) after the word breathe. This should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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You highlighted two different social issues in one-go here. Fine use of P alliteration as well. An ellipsis would acts a better pause(and dramatic, too) after the word breathe. This should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Hello Anupam, I thank you for your time and the wonderful review.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
II love the comparison between the George Floyd thing and the pandemic, but the first line doesn't make as much sense to me. A cloud of fear would not feel lifeless, I don't think.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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II love the comparison between the George Floyd thing and the pandemic, but the first line doesn't make as much sense to me. A cloud of fear would not feel lifeless, I don't think.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Hello Amanda and thank you for visiting; I appreciate your visit and the constructive review; I used "Lifeless" to imply stagnant or meaningless; witnessing the fear many are clouded with.