Feeling
The path to healing18 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker
You've chosen a very nice photo for your 1-6-1 poem. I like your words; they can be good counsel for anyone who is experiencing psychological pain or profound sadness. We shouldn't delay healing or grieving by holding back our tears (that's what I have learned personally). You say so much in 7 words.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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You've chosen a very nice photo for your 1-6-1 poem. I like your words; they can be good counsel for anyone who is experiencing psychological pain or profound sadness. We shouldn't delay healing or grieving by holding back our tears (that's what I have learned personally). You say so much in 7 words.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Cindy, thanks very much for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from royowen
Feelings embrace a broad spectrum of nice, and not so nice, and very bad. I think most of us are the "inactive" variety, but in wrIting it lets off steam, as it were! A beautifully written ententes in this contest. Fulfilling its requirements, Good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Feelings embrace a broad spectrum of nice, and not so nice, and very bad. I think most of us are the "inactive" variety, but in wrIting it lets off steam, as it were! A beautifully written ententes in this contest. Fulfilling its requirements, Good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Roy, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks so much for the kind words and review.
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Bless you
Comment from mermaids
This is a great poem because you teach the reader in so few words. Feeling our feelings can lead to being healed. Excellent use of words and you did well with the 1-6-1 form.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This is a great poem because you teach the reader in so few words. Feeling our feelings can lead to being healed. Excellent use of words and you did well with the 1-6-1 form.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Mermaids, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks very much for the kind words and encouragement.
Comment from jaded831
Feeling makes us know we're alive, but pain although we hurt will heal. Your poem reflects this beautifully. Every word weaves together to form a beautiful work of art. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Feeling makes us know we're alive, but pain although we hurt will heal. Your poem reflects this beautifully. Every word weaves together to form a beautiful work of art. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Jade, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks so much for the very kind words and review. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form--correct syllables per line, great picture and great message. Your rhymes are natural not forced. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Your contest entry is in good form--correct syllables per line, great picture and great message. Your rhymes are natural not forced. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Jan, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks very much for the kind review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
That picture and your words go together powerfully well! Oh, I do hope this poem does well in the 1-6-1 Syllable Poem contest. It is the perfect entry! I'm rooting for you!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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That picture and your words go together powerfully well! Oh, I do hope this poem does well in the 1-6-1 Syllable Poem contest. It is the perfect entry! I'm rooting for you!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Rebecca, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks so much for the very kind review and encouragement!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 1-6-1 poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good rhyme. I like your poem.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 1-6-1 poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good rhyme. I like your poem.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Gypsy, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks very much for the kind review.
Comment from harmony13
In this short poem the author states a simple healing concept. The poem
flows and connects well. I agree with the author's words feel your
feelings - it will create healing. The artwork is serene and goes well
with this poem. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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In this short poem the author states a simple healing concept. The poem
flows and connects well. I agree with the author's words feel your
feelings - it will create healing. The artwork is serene and goes well
with this poem. Have a great day!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Harmony, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks so much for the kind review.
Comment from The Death
You deliver a nice message here about letting our hearts feel everything around and heal. Fine rhyming in this short space. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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You deliver a nice message here about letting our hearts feel everything around and heal. Fine rhyming in this short space. Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks very much for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about feeling real will bring healing to our souls. When we came happiness ur will never reach our souls but make us even more unhappy.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about feeling real will bring healing to our souls. When we came happiness ur will never reach our souls but make us even more unhappy.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Sandra, sorry for the delay in responding. Thanks so much for the kind review.
