Come Imbibe with Me...
And let the warmth flow through you!14 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
That picture and your words go together powerfully well! Oh, I do hope this poem does well in the 15 Syllable Poem contest. It is the perfect entry! I'm rooting for you!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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That picture and your words go together powerfully well! Oh, I do hope this poem does well in the 15 Syllable Poem contest. It is the perfect entry! I'm rooting for you!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and rhyme.
-Effective imagery creating a
good word picture of the
beach in the morning.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and rhyme.
-Effective imagery creating a
good word picture of the
beach in the morning.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 1-6-1 poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good rhyme. Beautiful presentation and imagery of the beach.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 1-6-1 poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Good rhyme. Beautiful presentation and imagery of the beach.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, inviting and creative. I found these
words to be encourage serenity. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is beautiful and goes well with this poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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The author's words are engaging, inviting and creative. I found these
words to be encourage serenity. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork is beautiful and goes well with this poem.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from The Death
A morning walk by the beach is always refreshing! You nicely managed to capture your love for beaches and wine. Fine presentation. Good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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A morning walk by the beach is always refreshing! You nicely managed to capture your love for beaches and wine. Fine presentation. Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about feeling fine and alive when we feel the warm sun on the beach shining upon us feeling like wine that soothes the body and mind.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about feeling fine and alive when we feel the warm sun on the beach shining upon us feeling like wine that soothes the body and mind.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of the eight syllables allowed by the prompt to describe a lovely sunrise one might drink in like a sweet wine. Appealing simile
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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You have made excellent use of the eight syllables allowed by the prompt to describe a lovely sunrise one might drink in like a sweet wine. Appealing simile
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from kahpot
Wow! I like this one for it's meaning and the image your words give the reader, love the chosen artwork, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Wow! I like this one for it's meaning and the image your words give the reader, love the chosen artwork, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A refreshing vintage here as the sun is soaked up on an early morning and I liked your ambient message as we taste the age old sun, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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A refreshing vintage here as the sun is soaked up on an early morning and I liked your ambient message as we taste the age old sun, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, that is quite an image sunny mornings are like sunshine wine on a beach. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Wow, that is quite an image sunny mornings are like sunshine wine on a beach. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
