Kitty Playtime
Cat and mouse distractions...24 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous poem about the be kitten who is completely in control of the fun and games department in and work with responsibility is very low on be fun things to do list.
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A very well-written humorous poem about the be kitten who is completely in control of the fun and games department in and work with responsibility is very low on be fun things to do list.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This was very fun to read. Some cute puns like Cursors! were included. I thought you did an admirable job here with specific action verbs and true to life cat behavior in humorous re-telling.
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This was very fun to read. Some cute puns like Cursors! were included. I thought you did an admirable job here with specific action verbs and true to life cat behavior in humorous re-telling.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from UpNorth
Great personification of your cat--lilting rhymes kept the right pace. The variety of shenanigans your cat can use to distract were easily visualised. Good job.
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Great personification of your cat--lilting rhymes kept the right pace. The variety of shenanigans your cat can use to distract were easily visualised. Good job.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your nice comments.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup, I recognize the pattern, I got two naughty boys and they are playing this game too. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
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Yup, I recognize the pattern, I got two naughty boys and they are playing this game too. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
Comment from Melissa Russell Deur
I love that the cat knows a mouse is attached to the computer and mutters "Cursors!" I also like that the cat knows his owner is writing "dumb poetry" and plans to distract by climbing a curtain. Funny!
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I love that the cat knows a mouse is attached to the computer and mutters "Cursors!" I also like that the cat knows his owner is writing "dumb poetry" and plans to distract by climbing a curtain. Funny!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
Comment from Raul1
This is a very convincing poem and I think that it will definitely win. I have enjoyed reading it while laughing from it. Great work! Good luck on winning the contest!
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This is a very convincing poem and I think that it will definitely win. I have enjoyed reading it while laughing from it. Great work! Good luck on winning the contest!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Cats, especially young ones, are a riot--superb entertainers, very demanding, self-centered ones. Your poem is creative and delightful. You have used excellent examples to convey your cat message.
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Cats, especially young ones, are a riot--superb entertainers, very demanding, self-centered ones. Your poem is creative and delightful. You have used excellent examples to convey your cat message.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
Comment from Dick Waters
What a clever poem. The picture was perfect and the mouse was a great part of the story. I wish you luck in the contest, and there are many entries.
Nicely done.
Dick
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What a clever poem. The picture was perfect and the mouse was a great part of the story. I wish you luck in the contest, and there are many entries.
Nicely done.
Dick
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
Comment from lynglyng
This is a very well written poem. It flows nicely as it tells the story . It has a playful feel of the cat's attitude. I enjoyed reading it. You have a great style of writing.
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This is a very well written poem. It flows nicely as it tells the story . It has a playful feel of the cat's attitude. I enjoyed reading it. You have a great style of writing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
A great entry for the
Laughter writing prompt contest. It's pretty funny :) good form and presentation. I like the cat topic. My cat does the same thing...they are so cute. Good luck!
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Hello my friend
A great entry for the
Laughter writing prompt contest. It's pretty funny :) good form and presentation. I like the cat topic. My cat does the same thing...they are so cute. Good luck!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
