God, I miss those times
5-7-5 poem10 total reviews
Comment from Dick Waters
Very well done. Loved the bobble head effect.
Good guys also wore masks like us, they covered their eyes. Pearl handle revolvers also gave them away.
Such an innocent time.
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest!
I have an entry too.
Dick
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Very well done. Loved the bobble head effect.
Good guys also wore masks like us, they covered their eyes. Pearl handle revolvers also gave them away.
Such an innocent time.
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest!
I have an entry too.
Dick
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from jaded831
I'm biased I love cowboy movies. Your poem reflects what is going on today and inspires us to do the right thing to be the hero. Only problem is I have trouble figuring out who the bad guys are.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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I'm biased I love cowboy movies. Your poem reflects what is going on today and inspires us to do the right thing to be the hero. Only problem is I have trouble figuring out who the bad guys are.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Anonymous,
Beautiful 5/7/5 entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines with nice flow. I love Clint Eastwood too :) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Hello, Anonymous,
Beautiful 5/7/5 entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines with nice flow. I love Clint Eastwood too :) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a very good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It is simple, easy to read, and powerful at the same time. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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This is a very good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It is simple, easy to read, and powerful at the same time. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Yes, that's right! The bad guys didn't return because they had bought the farm and were pushing up daisies. I like this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Great job and well done!
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Yes, that's right! The bad guys didn't return because they had bought the farm and were pushing up daisies. I like this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
Comment from roof35
I love those good old days, too. This is a great illustration and it brings to mind all those "Spaghetti Westerns." You made me smile with your words and picture and we need more of that these days. Nicely done.
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I love those good old days, too. This is a great illustration and it brings to mind all those "Spaghetti Westerns." You made me smile with your words and picture and we need more of that these days. Nicely done.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
Comment from RodG
I, too, loved Eastwood's westerns. They were simple stories, blatantly violent, but indeed the "bad guys never returned." Who can forget "Blondie's" spurs or serape? Rod
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I, too, loved Eastwood's westerns. They were simple stories, blatantly violent, but indeed the "bad guys never returned." Who can forget "Blondie's" spurs or serape? Rod
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
Comment from mermaids
Your poem speaks for most of us, bad guys lost and good guys win. We live in a world of gray today. Excellent 5-7-5 form and use of words
Your poem evokes feelings.
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Your poem speaks for most of us, bad guys lost and good guys win. We live in a world of gray today. Excellent 5-7-5 form and use of words
Your poem evokes feelings.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
Bring back those good old days, right?!
Excellent 5-7-5 poem which is nicely presented and easy on the eye!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
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Hello :)
Bring back those good old days, right?!
Excellent 5-7-5 poem which is nicely presented and easy on the eye!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation is great, Mystery Writer. Your syllable count is correct per line, the image is perfect, and your message is true. Those good ol' days of 'real' movies will never happen again. The movies today can't even come close. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your presentation is great, Mystery Writer. Your syllable count is correct per line, the image is perfect, and your message is true. Those good ol' days of 'real' movies will never happen again. The movies today can't even come close. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020