Furtive glance
5/7/5 poem9 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Your poem tells a love story in few words. You created a tone that draws the reader in and I relished every word. The picture compliments your words beautifully. Together they create a wonderful package.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Your poem tells a love story in few words. You created a tone that draws the reader in and I relished every word. The picture compliments your words beautifully. Together they create a wonderful package.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Hello Carolyn and thank you very much for visiting; I am pleased that you like the write; appreciate it.
Comment from UpNorth
I like the concept-silence spoken in smiles is excellent. The first line seems awkward. Try: No sooner had eyes
encountered one another
silence spoke in smiles
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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I like the concept-silence spoken in smiles is excellent. The first line seems awkward. Try: No sooner had eyes
encountered one another
silence spoke in smiles
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Hello friend, I thank you for your time and the constructive review; welcome to the site and good luck!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Anonymous,
Beautiful 5/7/5 entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines with nice flow. I love the romantic topic :) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Hello, Anonymous,
Beautiful 5/7/5 entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. I like the presentation. Good syllable count and connection between lines with nice flow. I love the romantic topic :) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Hello Gypsy and thank you for stopping by; appreciate your visit and glad that you like the write.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem. It uses strong verbs and description.I would expect it to be a good contender for the contest, and wish you all good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem. It uses strong verbs and description.I would expect it to be a good contender for the contest, and wish you all good luck.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Hello Katherine and thank you very much for the wonderful, encouraging review; please take care and enjoy the weekend.
Comment from QC Poet
A very enjoyable 5-7-5 poem to read, I am wondering if the title was meant to say Flirtative glance? This also includes a Great matching photo selection. Thank you for Sharing this poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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A very enjoyable 5-7-5 poem to read, I am wondering if the title was meant to say Flirtative glance? This also includes a Great matching photo selection. Thank you for Sharing this poem.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Hello friend, I thank you for your time and the wonderful review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a very good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It is simple, easy to read, and powerful at the same time. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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This is a very good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It is simple, easy to read, and powerful at the same time. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Hello Rebecca and thank you for your time and the wonderful review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A glance can be all it takes to start a romance and who knows where it will lead, you sparked off a fine 5-7-5 to get my imagination going here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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A glance can be all it takes to start a romance and who knows where it will lead, you sparked off a fine 5-7-5 to get my imagination going here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Hello Dolly and thank you very much for your wonderful review; I am pleased you like the write and please keep your imagination going!
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
I think many have experienced this sensation whether it led to further involvement or just that fleeting moment. Great line: "silence spoke in smiles." Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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I think many have experienced this sensation whether it led to further involvement or just that fleeting moment. Great line: "silence spoke in smiles." Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Hello friend and thank you very much for your wonderful insights; I appreciate your time.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, there are many times when words need not be spoken--body language, in this case, eyes, says it all. I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, the image is perfect, and your message is clear. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Yes, there are many times when words need not be spoken--body language, in this case, eyes, says it all. I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your syllable count is correct per line, the image is perfect, and your message is clear. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Hello Jan, I am pleased to read your wonderful review; I appreciate your time, thank you very much.