Fragrance of Revenge
When you think you are having a nightmare, you can wake up.2 total reviews
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is a lovely little poem that we thoroughly enjoyed. The double use of revenge hampers the flow a tiny bit, but it's necessary for the last line to be appreciated. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful night.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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This is a lovely little poem that we thoroughly enjoyed. The double use of revenge hampers the flow a tiny bit, but it's necessary for the last line to be appreciated. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful night.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thank you people for reading one of my posts and for the very nice review. I'm glad you liked it. It obviously is a novel, which is why I had to use revenge as you mentioned. Thanks for the wishes and thanks again.
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Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. This woman found revenge and she paid for it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well written. I like it. Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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I like how you structured this poem. This woman found revenge and she paid for it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Well written. I like it. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
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Thanks Raul for reading one of my poems and for the very nice review. Thanks also for the best wishes in the contest...redheads can be tough to handle.
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