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Please Send Help

Message In A Bottle Contest Entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from Mia Twysted
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I was left laughing as I finished reading your story. I love how they mounted up and went to save those they thought were standard. But to find they were not in any danger at all and just wanted more beer was a wonderful twist.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Mia. I dearly appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. That's all I was really going for. I hope you have a wonderful rest of your weekend. Thank you again.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from LisaMay
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Jumping to conclusions can often result in abuse by others, when cheers turn to jeers. Oh well, you probably had a nice scenic flight in your helicopter to the Caribbean. Funny story. Enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from The Death
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

The ending was fun! No one would have expected that they would ask for beers instead of help. You deviated from the usual expectations associated with those bottles. Such a waste of time and efforts of that poor guy. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2020
    Thank you for the excellent review and generous stars, Death. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great night.