"The Gift of Life."
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2 total reviews
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is a very clever and creative story that held our attention throughout. Our eyes and brains were eagerly pursuing every line. The picture accompanying this story is absolutely perfect. Have a wonderful night.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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This is a very clever and creative story that held our attention throughout. Our eyes and brains were eagerly pursuing every line. The picture accompanying this story is absolutely perfect. Have a wonderful night.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
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Sometimes it comes down so hard and so fast I don't understand?
All's I know is I got to write it down for the pain in my hand...
Sometimes even though it makes me cry...
I thank the dear Lord that I didn't die.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Another strong piece. Love reading your poetry. The honesty is refreshing. I especially thought the last stanza was powerful. Great job again with your writing. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Another strong piece. Love reading your poetry. The honesty is refreshing. I especially thought the last stanza was powerful. Great job again with your writing. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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This is hard to write that I've done it many other times.
And, practice makes perfect of course!
Thanks Michael.
Doctor Ricky 1024