Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Desert Blooms"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
6 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, how I so wish I had the time!! I will soon, but I'll have to pop in to your page or Gypsy's to hook up then! ;) Beautiful addition here, my lady - thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Oh, how I so wish I had the time!! I will soon, but I'll have to pop in to your page or Gypsy's to hook up then! ;) Beautiful addition here, my lady - thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Yes, Gypsy's book is worth checking out. It's been fun contributing. You should try it~
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for adding your 5-7-5 to Gypsy Blue Rose's Renga book and linking it to the previous entry. I relished your artwork selection and addition of alliteration. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you for adding your 5-7-5 to Gypsy Blue Rose's Renga book and linking it to the previous entry. I relished your artwork selection and addition of alliteration. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thabk you!
Comment from Gloria ....
Another fine entry into Gypsy's renga book. It is very successful and that is a most cool thing to see.
Lovely imagery here, June and excellent presentation. It feels warm and luxurious. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Another fine entry into Gypsy's renga book. It is very successful and that is a most cool thing to see.
Lovely imagery here, June and excellent presentation. It feels warm and luxurious. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Yes, I am enjoying this book of Renga! Glad you liked this piece I contributed. It's been fun.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written poem to be added to the book. You used great descriptive words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. I love cactus flowers in bloom. Thanks for sharing. love, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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This is a very nice and well written poem to be added to the book. You used great descriptive words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. I love cactus flowers in bloom. Thanks for sharing. love, Teri
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you for following us in the Renga book! And for the positive feedback.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
Thank you very much for adding another chapter to our book. You did a great jobā?¦ good syllable count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Thank you for following the instructions. It's hard to keep up with the chapter order. If one person posts in the wrong place, the whole book is out of sink. Could you please copy and paste the following to your post? Make sure your posting is in order. Somehow, Roy's chapter is now a prologue... sigh...
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Renga is Japanese collaborative poetry in which alternating stanzas, of 5-7-5 stanza and 7-7 couplets are linked in succession by multiple poets. The most famous renga master was Matsuo Basho.
Guest poets check the last stanza in the renga book to know what to write next. A 5/7/5 stanza is followed by 7/7 couplet following the same theme without repeating the same words.
*If you would like to add a chapter to this book, please follow this instructions:
FIRST: click here first, find the last chapter in the renga book and open it
SECOND: click the ADD A CHAPTER icon above your review box.
THIRD: If the last chapter is a 5/7/5 haiku, add a 7/7 couplet; if the last one is a 7/7 add a 5/7/5; follow the theme of the verse you are following, not the previous ones.
FOURTH: post your chapter as usual. You will keep a copy in your portfolio and you keep all your reviews.
FIFTH: PLEASE COPY AND PASTE THIS INSTRUCTIONS TO YOUR AUTHOR NOTES
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Hello,
Thank you very much for adding another chapter to our book. You did a great jobā?¦ good syllable count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Thank you for following the instructions. It's hard to keep up with the chapter order. If one person posts in the wrong place, the whole book is out of sink. Could you please copy and paste the following to your post? Make sure your posting is in order. Somehow, Roy's chapter is now a prologue... sigh...
============BEGINNING OF COPY AND PASTE=============
Renga is Japanese collaborative poetry in which alternating stanzas, of 5-7-5 stanza and 7-7 couplets are linked in succession by multiple poets. The most famous renga master was Matsuo Basho.
Guest poets check the last stanza in the renga book to know what to write next. A 5/7/5 stanza is followed by 7/7 couplet following the same theme without repeating the same words.
*If you would like to add a chapter to this book, please follow this instructions:
FIRST: click here first, find the last chapter in the renga book and open it
SECOND: click the ADD A CHAPTER icon above your review box.
THIRD: If the last chapter is a 5/7/5 haiku, add a 7/7 couplet; if the last one is a 7/7 add a 5/7/5; follow the theme of the verse you are following, not the previous ones.
FOURTH: post your chapter as usual. You will keep a copy in your portfolio and you keep all your reviews.
FIFTH: PLEASE COPY AND PASTE THIS INSTRUCTIONS TO YOUR AUTHOR NOTES
==============END OF COPY AND PASTE==================
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Ok. I noticed what Roy did...too bad.
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Yes, Roy it's out of sequence and Mark is stalling the book....agggghhh
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Yes, Roy it's out of sequence and Mark is stalling the book....agggghhh
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I just noticed the entry after mine, which is 19, is numbered as 22. I think they need to change it to 20. It can be done, hopefully before someone posts a new one.
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Hello my friend, two poets made a mistake that threw off the sequence. I'm not sure if we can change it.
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I'm going to fix it today. Thank you
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, June!
What a lovely visual picture you have offered to readers in your well-crafted couplet. It has a definite "haiku feeling" to it! I have so enjoyed everyone's contributions! Yours is beautiful.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Good Morning, June!
What a lovely visual picture you have offered to readers in your well-crafted couplet. It has a definite "haiku feeling" to it! I have so enjoyed everyone's contributions! Yours is beautiful.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your positive comments.