Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Whirlwind Whistles"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
14 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Nature is portrayed here in all her awesome wonder 'cold whirlwind whistles', merely whistling, yet strident in her dominance- so much conveyed in so few words
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Nature is portrayed here in all her awesome wonder 'cold whirlwind whistles', merely whistling, yet strident in her dominance- so much conveyed in so few words
Comment Written 20-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your fourteen syllables in this descriptive
addition to the book. You have focused on the description of one specific natural event.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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You have made excellent use of your fourteen syllables in this descriptive
addition to the book. You have focused on the description of one specific natural event.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Janice. I appreciate your review and kind words.
gypsy
Comment from Gert sherwood
Gypsy 7/7 couplet following Rama Devi 5/7/5 haiku for Renga book is a chapter in the book Renga Multi=Author Book titled Whirlwind Whistles
Along with your amazing picture and haiku could envision the cold winds.
Gert
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Gypsy 7/7 couplet following Rama Devi 5/7/5 haiku for Renga book is a chapter in the book Renga Multi=Author Book titled Whirlwind Whistles
Along with your amazing picture and haiku could envision the cold winds.
Gert
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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thank you very much Gert
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You are welcome Gypsy Rose
Gert
Comment from Bill Schott
This renga couplet, Whirlwind Whistles, provides another section and moves us to the Pacific and Japan's famous mountain.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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This renga couplet, Whirlwind Whistles, provides another section and moves us to the Pacific and Japan's famous mountain.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Bill. I appreciate your review and kind words.
gypsy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written addition to the Renga book, and it seems to go well as I far each piece of the puzzle firs nicely in their places to tell a great story at the very end.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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A very well-written addition to the Renga book, and it seems to go well as I far each piece of the puzzle firs nicely in their places to tell a great story at the very end.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your review.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for adding to your own Renga book. I appreciated you listing the entries so far and enjoyed your linking your couplet to Rama Devi's 5-7-5. I could visualize Mt. Fuji even without the dramatic picture. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you for adding to your own Renga book. I appreciated you listing the entries so far and enjoyed your linking your couplet to Rama Devi's 5-7-5. I could visualize Mt. Fuji even without the dramatic picture. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Joan. A six stars rating! wow! Thank you very much. I hope you have a fantastic day.
gypsy
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I wish I could give six stars to the poem and to the whole project! More cheers- Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine couplet to follow Rama's 5-7-5 and your book is a success and it I read it through again with all the entries and it is all a joy to read, you added another touch of magic here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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A fine couplet to follow Rama's 5-7-5 and your book is a success and it I read it through again with all the entries and it is all a joy to read, you added another touch of magic here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. :) Have a wonderful day.
Comment from June Sargent
From a spring storm in the Keys to winter winds over Mt Fuji - what a journey! This book is turning into a lovely adventure. Thank you for sharing it!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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From a spring storm in the Keys to winter winds over Mt Fuji - what a journey! This book is turning into a lovely adventure. Thank you for sharing it!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, June. Yes, I love the way the book is growing and evolving. Hugs
Comment from lightink
I love how you introduced a new element after the past two pieces. The sound of it is beautiful:
"cold whirlwind whistles over"
and it's nice to have a specific location!
This is an awesome project!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I love how you introduced a new element after the past two pieces. The sound of it is beautiful:
"cold whirlwind whistles over"
and it's nice to have a specific location!
This is an awesome project!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, my friend, I am excited about it too.
Hugs
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your couplet, Gypsy. Your words are descriptive with great imagery. I like the alliteration and the beautiful image. Your multi-author book has received many super entries. I have enjoyed reading each one. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed your couplet, Gypsy. Your words are descriptive with great imagery. I like the alliteration and the beautiful image. Your multi-author book has received many super entries. I have enjoyed reading each one. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much, Jan. You are always very encouraging and kind. I appreciate it. Have a wonderful day or night.