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Comment from John bailey
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Doctor Ricky if I could find something wrong with this poem I would tell you but once again,
it is your trade mark,you write about dealth, I write about lost love,I think they are going to kill us both. misery loves company,don't go near the water.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    every time I go to the beach before I write I go out as far as a wife going to let me lay on my back and float for half an hour and feel the water in my ears...
    Somehow this helps me connect?
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from K Arlington Andrews
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Of course my curiosity... what does Mis-Ser-Seas mean? drew me to read this piece.
'She awaits me with her keys... I wonder is she Death? The great hereafter? Fascinating piece. I enjoyed it very much. All the Best, K

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
    "Mis-Ser-Seas"
    And, to learn more about a man's "Misery."
    Yes, including mine?
    Well, after the loss of a 18 year old son.
    And, then only Eight months later?
    Your wife of almost Twenty years?
    After committing suicide?
    ...
    "Misery"
    Starring James caan and Kathy Bates.
    After you watch that movie then you'll realize what "Mis-Ser-Sea"
    Really is.
    And yes the Poem that was presented?
    Was my intention self drowning at the ocean.
    In other words?
    My intentional suicide.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"