Scandalous Stars
Two friends meet for a drink4 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
Funny! I thought your poetry rhymed well, and flowed smoothly from start to finish! Your choice of picture and part of your rhyme led me to think you were leaving to go to a bar! Good work. Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Funny! I thought your poetry rhymed well, and flowed smoothly from start to finish! Your choice of picture and part of your rhyme led me to think you were leaving to go to a bar! Good work. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you
Comment from LisaMay
Hahaha... what a hoot you gals must've looked - i hope you kept your clothes on though. Your poem is light and funny - i enjoyed it.
You need to learn when to use your and you're in different meanings.
In this sentence: "Your not yourself, it's like your wearing a mask" you have used your when it should be the abbreviation of you are (you're, not your).
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Hahaha... what a hoot you gals must've looked - i hope you kept your clothes on though. Your poem is light and funny - i enjoyed it.
You need to learn when to use your and you're in different meanings.
In this sentence: "Your not yourself, it's like your wearing a mask" you have used your when it should be the abbreviation of you are (you're, not your).
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. I simply overlooked the correct usage. Thank you for the correction and the review!
Comment from zanya
Yes why not - a little bit of fun and frolic - we need some of that right now -that cola fiz sure worked wonders - and a great title to enhance -thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Yes why not - a little bit of fun and frolic - we need some of that right now -that cola fiz sure worked wonders - and a great title to enhance -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your kind review. I?m glad that you enjoyed it.
Comment from humpwhistle
Reality stars, eh? That's a big step toward an eventual Presidency. I'm guessing that was some high-octane cola used in the making of those fizzes. (Two Z's, I beleive).
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
"Your not yourself, it's like your wearing a mask." You're, not your--twice.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Reality stars, eh? That's a big step toward an eventual Presidency. I'm guessing that was some high-octane cola used in the making of those fizzes. (Two Z's, I beleive).
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
"Your not yourself, it's like your wearing a mask." You're, not your--twice.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
