Yes I missed a verse
One sip of rum7 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Funny I'm laughing as I read this ð??? hip hop and a bottle of rum. Shake it mixed tasted, wasted, rightful delightful adventure. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Funny I'm laughing as I read this ð??? hip hop and a bottle of rum. Shake it mixed tasted, wasted, rightful delightful adventure. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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It had me laughing as I wrote it! I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from poetwatch
Here's to you, my friend. I'll cradle the bottle and just have me a drink for your missed verse got me to think. I can do that... but now I can't think... one too many and we all sink. :) This is a very good way to write a poem for it's a good entry for the, The Drink Poetry contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Here's to you, my friend. I'll cradle the bottle and just have me a drink for your missed verse got me to think. I can do that... but now I can't think... one too many and we all sink. :) This is a very good way to write a poem for it's a good entry for the, The Drink Poetry contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I drink, therefore I am.
Cheers to you friend. Thanks
Comment from mermaids
You have a strong steady beat in your poem. I can hear your words being read out loud. You capture the image of individuals consuming alcohol with your words. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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You have a strong steady beat in your poem. I can hear your words being read out loud. You capture the image of individuals consuming alcohol with your words. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thanks, I had fun with it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the The Drink Poetry writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well. Nice presentation and connection between lines. Great drinking rum topic.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend
Nice entry for the The Drink Poetry writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well. Nice presentation and connection between lines. Great drinking rum topic.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Please let me win or I'm switching to gin.
Comment from roof35
This poem made me chuckle. We need more laughs in this terrible time. I could picture your character singing the words, "Rum rum it's all around."
This was fun read.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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This poem made me chuckle. We need more laughs in this terrible time. I could picture your character singing the words, "Rum rum it's all around."
This was fun read.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I had fun writing this!
Thanks for the review.
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, and why do you think they call it demon rum? I used to love rum. Then I visited a rum distillery in Jamaica. The smell of molasses was so overpowering, I haven't been able to down another drop of rum to this day.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Ah, and why do you think they call it demon rum? I used to love rum. Then I visited a rum distillery in Jamaica. The smell of molasses was so overpowering, I haven't been able to down another drop of rum to this day.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I love your review. I myself only drink once in a blue moon, though I used to drink like a fish!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is the lure of alcohol as we can never just have one drink and so we are consumed by it until we finally give up and sleep for a long time, hopefully not forever! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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This is the lure of alcohol as we can never just have one drink and so we are consumed by it until we finally give up and sleep for a long time, hopefully not forever! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had a lot of fun writing it!
