Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Landscape of rainbows"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Gert sherwood
ameen786
Your 7-7-7 haiku
Brings out my thoughts of an autumn day as my hubby and I are paddling a canoe toward a vibrant island of colors.
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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ameen786
Your 7-7-7 haiku
Brings out my thoughts of an autumn day as my hubby and I are paddling a canoe toward a vibrant island of colors.
Gert
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Gert my friend, very kind of you to stop by; I appreciate your time and the wonderful review; enjoy the canoeing and please be safe, thank you.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for adding to Gypsy Blue Rose's Renga book. I enjoyed your linking your words to the previous stanza. I sill cannot get over how startlingly beautiful the picture is! Cheers and happy Sunday- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you for adding to Gypsy Blue Rose's Renga book. I enjoyed your linking your words to the previous stanza. I sill cannot get over how startlingly beautiful the picture is! Cheers and happy Sunday- Joan
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thanks to Google images for the picture and I thank you for your time and the wonderful review. Take care my friend.
Comment from rama devi
Lovely response to the previous segment. I love the voicing here. Warm rainbow landscape! And envelop is such a comforting verb in this context. I feel hugged by color! Good job, Ameenji!
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Lovely response to the previous segment. I love the voicing here. Warm rainbow landscape! And envelop is such a comforting verb in this context. I feel hugged by color! Good job, Ameenji!
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Namaskar Deviji and thank you for your visit; glad to read your wonderful review.
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Namaskar!
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh so beautiful Kamran. It was like being there and that is the one thing I love about Autumn is all the different colours.
My pleasure to read and review today. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Oh so beautiful Kamran. It was like being there and that is the one thing I love about Autumn is all the different colours.
My pleasure to read and review today. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Gloria my friend, I am pleased to read your wonderful review; thank you very much.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Ameen,
Wonderful addition to our renga book! Thank you for adding my author notes. Would you please add this sentence above the rules?
If you plan to add a chapter, Please, COPY AND PASTE these rules to your author notes. Thank you!
Thank you very much, my friend. Please contribute again any time you would like to.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Hello, Ameen,
Wonderful addition to our renga book! Thank you for adding my author notes. Would you please add this sentence above the rules?
If you plan to add a chapter, Please, COPY AND PASTE these rules to your author notes. Thank you!
Thank you very much, my friend. Please contribute again any time you would like to.
Gypsy
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Gypsy my friend, I thank you for your help and I have added the additional notes.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a beautiful image and equally beautiful couplet that describes it so perfectly. I enjoyed reading your contribution to the book. Your words flow smoothly with super imagery--even if a picture had not be included. I love autumn.
Thanks for sharing,
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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What a beautiful image and equally beautiful couplet that describes it so perfectly. I enjoyed reading your contribution to the book. Your words flow smoothly with super imagery--even if a picture had not be included. I love autumn.
Thanks for sharing,
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Hello Jan, I am pleased to read your wonderful comments; thank you very much.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
lovely contribution to the renga! The rainbow landscape is nicely indicating the beginning of autumn and the picture is a perfect match to the feeling I got of this enveloping colorscheme.
Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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lovely contribution to the renga! The rainbow landscape is nicely indicating the beginning of autumn and the picture is a perfect match to the feeling I got of this enveloping colorscheme.
Well done!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Hello Marjon and thank you very much for your time and the insights.
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Welcome!
Comment from H. Darwin Reeves
Very nice. For those of us that appreciate the fall season, you have captured the feeling we experience when the leaves turn and the air cools.
The thrill of the colors of the leaves are a "rainbow landscape." Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Very nice. For those of us that appreciate the fall season, you have captured the feeling we experience when the leaves turn and the air cools.
The thrill of the colors of the leaves are a "rainbow landscape." Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Hello friend and thank you very much for the wonderful review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Ameen, I liked your 7-7 couplet that followed my poem a lot. It follows the theme of my 5-7-5 very nicely and you have soome lovely imagery.Yes I liked it a lot. For readers who follows this book you should maybe have mentioned that it followed my 5-7-5 poem. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Hi Ameen, I liked your 7-7 couplet that followed my poem a lot. It follows the theme of my 5-7-5 very nicely and you have soome lovely imagery.Yes I liked it a lot. For readers who follows this book you should maybe have mentioned that it followed my 5-7-5 poem. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend, I thank you for your time; appreciate the review and I have mentioned about your haiku; thank you.
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Autumn is a glorious season and often overlooked when compared to love as spring or summer are. But I love the burst of life and energy of fall and I think it is just as lovely. Nicely penned.
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Autumn is a glorious season and often overlooked when compared to love as spring or summer are. But I love the burst of life and energy of fall and I think it is just as lovely. Nicely penned.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Hello Margaret, I am pleased that you like the write; appreciate your visit and the wonderful review; thank you very much.