Behold, and then Be
Take comfort in His path for us.30 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Perfectly reverent and illuminated by grace and a very gifted writer! This progresses down the page seamlessly melding the beauty of nature with the Creator who offered us this very path to salvation and joy!--Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Perfectly reverent and illuminated by grace and a very gifted writer! This progresses down the page seamlessly melding the beauty of nature with the Creator who offered us this very path to salvation and joy!--Karenina
Comment Written 20-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Very kind words. Thanks so much!
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As the umpire says in the old story: :I call 'em as I see 'em!"----(smile)---Karenina
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Glorious imagery in vivid multi-color--beautifully structured. (for you and I s/b for you and me grammatically speaking, but that wouldn't rhyme with sky, so I'll grant you dispensation despite its being a pet peeve!) Lovely and elegant. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Glorious imagery in vivid multi-color--beautifully structured. (for you and I s/b for you and me grammatically speaking, but that wouldn't rhyme with sky, so I'll grant you dispensation despite its being a pet peeve!) Lovely and elegant. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Raul1
I think that you have written an excellent poem. It is full of mystery and you placed the murderer in this poem. Excellent work! Great! Thanks for sharing! I like it because it's mysterious.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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I think that you have written an excellent poem. It is full of mystery and you placed the murderer in this poem. Excellent work! Great! Thanks for sharing! I like it because it's mysterious.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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I'm fascinated by your take on my poem. Thanks for your time and kind review.
Comment from ameen786
Beautiful reflections upon nature and indeed, we can experience/witness God's presence in nature that's flawless; would have made a great entry for the faith poetry contest; thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Beautiful reflections upon nature and indeed, we can experience/witness God's presence in nature that's flawless; would have made a great entry for the faith poetry contest; thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
What a beautiful poem of Faith. Why didn't you enter that contest that will be judged in 4 days? I am in it but would concede that your poem is the best. Bless you and your wisdom.
Ralf
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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What a beautiful poem of Faith. Why didn't you enter that contest that will be judged in 4 days? I am in it but would concede that your poem is the best. Bless you and your wisdom.
Ralf
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you! It's a special thing when a stranger gives a six. It's very much appreciated and unexpected. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you for your good wishes.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I like that we need to remove our muzzle and it seems we are all muzzled these days, but we miss so much by not being aware of nature and the magnificence of it, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I like that we need to remove our muzzle and it seems we are all muzzled these days, but we miss so much by not being aware of nature and the magnificence of it, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from The Death
The first two stanzas have excellent imagery. Fine phrasing as well. It shows the faith you have in Him and the blessings--depending on one's belief. If only people would actually start being kind instead of praying for their own sake.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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The first two stanzas have excellent imagery. Fine phrasing as well. It shows the faith you have in Him and the blessings--depending on one's belief. If only people would actually start being kind instead of praying for their own sake.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Amazing! I really enjoyed this poem! Your words ring true and are easy to read. I love the rhyme and rhythm! I will be watching for more of your work!
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Amazing! I really enjoyed this poem! Your words ring true and are easy to read. I love the rhyme and rhythm! I will be watching for more of your work!
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from TPAC
A inspirational read, finding many deposited items believe in faith and worshipped as truth, compelling self proclaims that shouts pure intents. Always for myself to ponder God statement of just words no depth to the soul that spoke them. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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A inspirational read, finding many deposited items believe in faith and worshipped as truth, compelling self proclaims that shouts pure intents. Always for myself to ponder God statement of just words no depth to the soul that spoke them. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thanks for the stars!
Comment from Mastery
This is undoubtedly one of the best poems I have everread on this site, Clockwise. The lines are all so meaningful, like these for instance:
"a covenant
that's heaven sent,
which cannot
be undone."
And these, too:
"Let Him remove
your muzzle,
and that beam
within your eye,
I am also from Micigan. Western half of the state.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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This is undoubtedly one of the best poems I have everread on this site, Clockwise. The lines are all so meaningful, like these for instance:
"a covenant
that's heaven sent,
which cannot
be undone."
And these, too:
"Let Him remove
your muzzle,
and that beam
within your eye,
I am also from Micigan. Western half of the state.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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I grew up north of GR, and now live in the Kzoo/Battle Creek area. Thanks for the stars!
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My grand daughter lives in Marshall. I am living in Muskegon, on the lakeshore. Nice meeting you, fellow FS member. May I ask your name? :) Bob
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Hello Bob. My name is Jacob.
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Thanks, Jacob. Do you like Jacob or Jake better? :) Bob
