Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Nature's Love "Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
31 total reviews
Comment from The Death
Excellent word economy as you have used each syllable so well. I liked how you showed that time allows love to ripen, eventually providing it with different colors. Nice presentation.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Excellent word economy as you have used each syllable so well. I liked how you showed that time allows love to ripen, eventually providing it with different colors. Nice presentation.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you so very much. I so appreciate it. Ulla:))
Comment from UpNorth
Yes, the changing colors of the season is definetly echoed in the change of life's pallette . Love of self in nature's generous sharing of color, smell, botanical wealth.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Yes, the changing colors of the season is definetly echoed in the change of life's pallette . Love of self in nature's generous sharing of color, smell, botanical wealth.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Lynn. I so appreciate it. Ulla:)))
Comment from Gloria ....
Yes, Ulla! The expansion of nature's colours of love brings all kinds of bounty to be enjoyed.
A fine addition to the renga and a joy to read this evening. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Yes, Ulla! The expansion of nature's colours of love brings all kinds of bounty to be enjoyed.
A fine addition to the renga and a joy to read this evening. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Aw, Gloria, I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you very much!. Ulla:)))
Comment from Irish Rain
I like this a lot.
It makes love sound like
a fine wine, that ages
beautifully.
While nature enhances the
setting for it.
So pretty!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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I like this a lot.
It makes love sound like
a fine wine, that ages
beautifully.
While nature enhances the
setting for it.
So pretty!
Blessings...
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2020
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Wow, Thank you so very much and for the extra shining star. I'm so glad that you liked it. That means so very much to me. Warm regards. Ulla xx
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Have a nice week!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written addition to the Renga in answer to Lyenochka's couplet, your view is that love grows and ripens while in nature things multiply in a pallet of color.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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A very well-written addition to the Renga in answer to Lyenochka's couplet, your view is that love grows and ripens while in nature things multiply in a pallet of color.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Sandra, I so appreciate your review. I'm glad you liked it. Ulla:)))
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Love and nature. Life does take on a gorgeous hue when we are positive and focused on love. A nice use of the "L" sound in this poetic 5-7-5. I'm enjoying these transitions from the previous poem.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Love and nature. Life does take on a gorgeous hue when we are positive and focused on love. A nice use of the "L" sound in this poetic 5-7-5. I'm enjoying these transitions from the previous poem.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Margaret.I'm so glad you liked it. Ulla:)))
Comment from harmony13
These words are filled with beauty and color. I found the first two lines
flow and connect well. The last line puts the poem altogether. Thank
you for the author's notes. Have a great weekend!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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These words are filled with beauty and color. I found the first two lines
flow and connect well. The last line puts the poem altogether. Thank
you for the author's notes. Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. I so appreciate it. Ulla:)))
Comment from Mistydawn
What a beautifully written poem. You were able to paint such a vivid picture compare, contrast two completely subjects using so few words. Your picture is perfect for the poem. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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What a beautifully written poem. You were able to paint such a vivid picture compare, contrast two completely subjects using so few words. Your picture is perfect for the poem. Nicely done.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Aw, Misty, thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it. Ulla:)))
Comment from rama devi
Compelling voicing. Unique and well expressed. Fine presentation too. I like the personification of Nature as an artist with an expanding palette!
Even though haiku frowns on capitalization, I do recommend capping Nature, since it's used like a proper noun (which is permissible). Optional suggestion.
Nice work, dear Ulla.
Warm Smiles,
rd
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Compelling voicing. Unique and well expressed. Fine presentation too. I like the personification of Nature as an artist with an expanding palette!
Even though haiku frowns on capitalization, I do recommend capping Nature, since it's used like a proper noun (which is permissible). Optional suggestion.
Nice work, dear Ulla.
Warm Smiles,
rd
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, rama. I so appreciate your review and comments. I think you are right about nature. I'll have a think about it. Ulla:)))
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine addition to the Multi- author book here Ulla, the colour of nature is always so pleasing each season and a touch of romance never goes amiss, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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A fine addition to the Multi- author book here Ulla, the colour of nature is always so pleasing each season and a touch of romance never goes amiss, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Awe,Dolly, Thank you so much.IIsoapppreciate it. Ulla xx