Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Summer by the Pond"Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
19 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is an interesting format. I rather lo,e it an will give it a try myself sometime today. Have a blessed week......
Patricia
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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This is an interesting format. I rather lo,e it an will give it a try myself sometime today. Have a blessed week......
Patricia
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you! Glad you liked this piece.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for adding to Gypsy Blue Rose's Renga book. Your two lines follow beautifully and give a detailed description of the scene. The second time I looked at the artwork, I saw the two butterflies--a bonus! Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you for adding to Gypsy Blue Rose's Renga book. Your two lines follow beautifully and give a detailed description of the scene. The second time I looked at the artwork, I saw the two butterflies--a bonus! Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you! Glad you liked this piece.
Comment from rama devi
This shifts gears into giggling lovers...making me wonder where the next entry will go! Lovely presentation. Excellent phonics of alliteraiton and consonance of W!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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This shifts gears into giggling lovers...making me wonder where the next entry will go! Lovely presentation. Excellent phonics of alliteraiton and consonance of W!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to share your feedback!
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xxoo
Comment from The Death
Excellent imagery in this poem! One can easily visualize the lovers giggling as the willows sway. Fine presentation as well.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Excellent imagery in this poem! One can easily visualize the lovers giggling as the willows sway. Fine presentation as well.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by!
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent imagery in your couplet, June. And now a little mystery has been introduced well into the beginning of summer.
A lovely contribution to the renga and a most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Excellent imagery in your couplet, June. And now a little mystery has been introduced well into the beginning of summer.
A lovely contribution to the renga and a most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A walking among the flowers and trees is an ideal to spend an afternoon when lovers can giggle as you say and children can play, an ambient write June, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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A walking among the flowers and trees is an ideal to spend an afternoon when lovers can giggle as you say and children can play, an ambient write June, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you! I?ve enjoyed being a contributor to this book of Renga.
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting new direction from the "orchard's withdrawal" in Gloria's poem to this summer scene with the lovely alliteration of s and w words. And now love is in the air. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Interesting new direction from the "orchard's withdrawal" in Gloria's poem to this summer scene with the lovely alliteration of s and w words. And now love is in the air. Nicely done.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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It?s going to interesting to see how this book of Renga evolves. Thank you for your insights.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are sweet, clear and creative. The poem flows and
connects well. The author's words created a vision for me of this scene.
The artwork is beautiful and compliments these words.
Have a great weekend!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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The author's words are sweet, clear and creative. The poem flows and
connects well. The author's words created a vision for me of this scene.
The artwork is beautiful and compliments these words.
Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
Well done June, you've done a splendid job with this wonderful renga poem to add to Gypsy's poetic manifold, she is a prolific writer of Japanese poetry, well done June, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Well done June, you've done a splendid job with this wonderful renga poem to add to Gypsy's poetic manifold, she is a prolific writer of Japanese poetry, well done June, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Thank you! It?s actually a fun challenge. Should be interesting to see how the story unfolds...
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Well done
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Summer by the Pond
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Beautiful entry for the renga book. Good syllable count and connection between lines. You followed the previous theme well. I love Willow trees. Thank you for adding to our renga book.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Summer by the Pond
by June Sargent
Hello, June,
Beautiful entry for the renga book. Good syllable count and connection between lines. You followed the previous theme well. I love Willow trees. Thank you for adding to our renga book.
Gypsy
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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My pleasure! I am thoroughly enjoying the journey and will contribute now and then to see where the muse leads us all!
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Yes, that's the idea. Thank you :)