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Children Stories from the Heart.
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Comment from
Melodie Michelle
I simply do not understand where you are going with any of this story.
There was really no warning or guidance stating where you should go, so with that being said, I'm going to shut this off!
This is the first time ever, in all my experience, to fall into this being stuck and speechless over such a crazy entry, with no explanation, no anything;-)
I appreciate and thank you so much for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
To be concluded later today
reply by Melodie Michelle on 16-Jul-2020
Comment from
January L'Angelle
Hey Ricky, I want to hear more by Annie Oakley. I like the way you started with the moon phases and how God created them and He thought it was good. Then you went into Annie Oakley... what?? LOL. I have to say, I laughed. I thought it was cute. ---waiting for more! Hugs. God bless you my dear friend. -January L. :)
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
Why thanks January.
For that and it is completed now.
And also, you're in it!
Ricky.
reply by January L'Angelle on 17-Jul-2020
I'm in it!!!!!! Yeah!!!!! That's sooooo exciting! You are the sweetest! Show me where so I can see. Hugs! xoxo.
January. :)
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
Just review it again it's been added to.
Ricky
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