Some Guys are just born with it
A Senryu40 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! Of course I knew what he meant!!! LOL, You've really found the perfect photo for this poem, and he's gorgeous too. The girls will all be after this handsome lad, with the big .... smile! LOL Loved it. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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LOL! Of course I knew what he meant!!! LOL, You've really found the perfect photo for this poem, and he's gorgeous too. The girls will all be after this handsome lad, with the big .... smile! LOL Loved it. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from rjuselius
I thought It means that the baby is adoring. But what do i know ð??? anyhoo a lovely piece altogether.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
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I thought It means that the baby is adoring. But what do i know ð??? anyhoo a lovely piece altogether.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Babies always melt our hearts, no matter what they look like, we just can't help falling in love. You also teased us here with your clever words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Babies always melt our hearts, no matter what they look like, we just can't help falling in love. You also teased us here with your clever words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Senryu
Some Guys are just born with it
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the
Senryu writing prompt contest. Your Senryu is funny and witty and has the right amount of syllables. Good connection between lines. The presentation is super cute.
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Senryu
Some Guys are just born with it
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the
Senryu writing prompt contest. Your Senryu is funny and witty and has the right amount of syllables. Good connection between lines. The presentation is super cute.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from royowen
I think this is a marvellous senryu, there are many important characteristics in a child, and this is quite hilarious, a great sense of humour, and a great tongue in the cheek, post, well done, blessings, Roy
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I think this is a marvellous senryu, there are many important characteristics in a child, and this is quite hilarious, a great sense of humour, and a great tongue in the cheek, post, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu about this little guy who seems to be born with a big load of confidence that will melt the ladies hearts wherever he goes.
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A very well-written Senryu about this little guy who seems to be born with a big load of confidence that will melt the ladies hearts wherever he goes.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Some Guys are just born with it", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this a tiny, bright and smiling six! Good luck with the contest.
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"Some Guys are just born with it", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. To me, this a tiny, bright and smiling six! Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from bob cullen
I wasn't aware anyone had baby photos of Donald Trump at six weeks of age. Seriously though what a bubbly little bundle of life. Hope he's still smiling when he's fifty.
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I wasn't aware anyone had baby photos of Donald Trump at six weeks of age. Seriously though what a bubbly little bundle of life. Hope he's still smiling when he's fifty.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from Brandi27
Very creative poem! Babies are just the cutest thing ever and it's wonderful that you chose to write about them. I haven't read many poems like this one. It's very original and so adorable! :)
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Very creative poem! Babies are just the cutest thing ever and it's wonderful that you chose to write about them. I haven't read many poems like this one. It's very original and so adorable! :)
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
Comment from Earl Corp
This was a pretty cool senyru. I guess some people are just born with confidence, you either have it or you don't.. Very nice job.Good luck in the contest,
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This was a pretty cool senyru. I guess some people are just born with confidence, you either have it or you don't.. Very nice job.Good luck in the contest,
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
