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Some Guys are just born with it

A Senryu

40 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This senryu, Some Guys are Just Born With It, presented as a 5-7-5, is humbling to see my baby picture held in such high esteem.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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Comment from Bichon
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This was a funny poem. The photo in combination with the poetry text represents the idea of confidence well. A good entry into the contest with the senryu format.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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Comment from Ogden
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Exceptional work! The horny and egotistical baby's expression is priceless! This funny poem should have an excellent chance in the contest.

Odden (Don)

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
    Thank you very much.
reply by Ogden on 17-Jul-2020
    You are most welcome.
    Don
reply by Ogden on 17-Jul-2020
    You re very welcome,
    Don
Comment from Eternal Muse
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What a cute poem and photo! I like the wit and message too. He is the most adorable baby and what a smile! This should do very well in the contest, good luck in the booths.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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Comment from Jade Evans
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What a lovely short piece.
A wonderful read and what a beautiful baby with a beautiful smile.
Made me smile... thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Wow, kid with an attitude only six weeks old and thinks that is the king of the universe, so how do you explain this? Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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Comment from Patty Palmer
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What a little cutie! That smile lights up her whole face. I can just hear her giggling. Must be a very happy baby! And to tell you the truth, I still don't know what it meant. LOL
Patty

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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Comment from Mastery
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Well, Good Luck to you in the contest author. One can only assume a sense of humor will prevail amongst the judges becaus ethat last line is priceless.

Your Senryu is very well done. : ) Bob

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020

Comment from Susan Larson
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Absolutely adorable picture. How fortunate someone had a camera on hand to capture the moment. Very cute poem that does indeed describe this little guy's confidence. This looks like a winner.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020

Comment from Janet Foor
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Great picture. This little guy sure was born with Self-confidence.
Excellent senryu using your 17 syllables to make a statement in the present tense.
Very nicely done

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2020