Some Guys are just born with it
A Senryu40 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
A future lady killer is born! He is irresistibly cute. Now if we can just match him up with "The Naughty Lady of Shady Lane." (Why do I keep remembering those old songs?) I saw this on the list of contest winners, and thought is was a great entry. Worthy of the win, and Congratulations. judi
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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A future lady killer is born! He is irresistibly cute. Now if we can just match him up with "The Naughty Lady of Shady Lane." (Why do I keep remembering those old songs?) I saw this on the list of contest winners, and thought is was a great entry. Worthy of the win, and Congratulations. judi
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much. When I saw this little guy, I had to write about him. He looked Bad to the Bone.
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You're welcome. That guy is going to be hard to hold down. judi
Comment from DeboraDyess
They certainly know they are the very center of our universe, don't they. :)
This is a super cute sneyu, and you've included a great photo. Is this your little nugget?
Thank you for a fun senyu that brings back memories of my own little ones. :)
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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They certainly know they are the very center of our universe, don't they. :)
This is a super cute sneyu, and you've included a great photo. Is this your little nugget?
Thank you for a fun senyu that brings back memories of my own little ones. :)
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much. No, he's too cool to be mine.
Comment from Raul1
Congratulations on winning the Senryu poem competition. Much deserved award! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Nice work! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Congratulations on winning the Senryu poem competition. Much deserved award! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Nice work! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is an interesting approach. Some guys start very early. He's already learning how to be cute and flirty. Pre-school will be chaotic for the little girls.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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This is an interesting approach. Some guys start very early. He's already learning how to be cute and flirty. Pre-school will be chaotic for the little girls.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Cindy Decker
Very nice and sweet poem. The photo is adorable; I love your gently "suggestive" poem, downplayed by your author's notes. (I knew what you meant).
Amazing and sweet.
Best wishes for all your contests,
Cindy
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Very nice and sweet poem. The photo is adorable; I love your gently "suggestive" poem, downplayed by your author's notes. (I knew what you meant).
Amazing and sweet.
Best wishes for all your contests,
Cindy
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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LOL. Thank You.
Comment from Ben Colder
He's a dandy. Love the photo. So innocent, so real. Born into a world of trouble. Thanks for sharing your write. Very nicely done. I hope you win the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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He's a dandy. Love the photo. So innocent, so real. Born into a world of trouble. Thanks for sharing your write. Very nicely done. I hope you win the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I feel like their is a hidden message in this that perhaps obviously comes through. I guess it depends on what is said or perceived to be said. Thanks for sharing this cute, humorous, and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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I feel like their is a hidden message in this that perhaps obviously comes through. I guess it depends on what is said or perceived to be said. Thanks for sharing this cute, humorous, and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Jeffrey.
Comment from ameen786
Kid's definitely has Trump's genes; a born narcissist! He-he, a beautiful entry, six weeks old deserves nothing less than six stars; you got a winner here; good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Kid's definitely has Trump's genes; a born narcissist! He-he, a beautiful entry, six weeks old deserves nothing less than six stars; you got a winner here; good luck!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Barbaraj1
I love this poem. The picture of the baby is so cute. It really fits the poem.
Wait until this little guy grows up. He will have all the girls going after him.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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I love this poem. The picture of the baby is so cute. It really fits the poem.
Wait until this little guy grows up. He will have all the girls going after him.
Good luck.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from The Death
The thing with these short forms--especially senryu(as you call this), is that they should be able to stand on their own. Do you think you words would mean much if that picture isn't there? Will they have the same impact? If no, this needs revision. I wouldn't deduct any star for this, as I know it doesn't go well with most of the people here.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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The thing with these short forms--especially senryu(as you call this), is that they should be able to stand on their own. Do you think you words would mean much if that picture isn't there? Will they have the same impact? If no, this needs revision. I wouldn't deduct any star for this, as I know it doesn't go well with most of the people here.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
