Can't Find My Bloodhound
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Comment from Bill Schott
This witty animal 5-7-5, Can't Find My Bloodhound, has the right set up and reminds me of that one dog who could hide with the best of them.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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This witty animal 5-7-5, Can't Find My Bloodhound, has the right set up and reminds me of that one dog who could hide with the best of them.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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thank you. The idea for it just came out of the blue.
Comment from gramalot8
This is a great bloodhound story. So funny that a dog that is supposed to be good at finding things is what everyone is trying to find! Lol! Love it and thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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This is a great bloodhound story. So funny that a dog that is supposed to be good at finding things is what everyone is trying to find! Lol! Love it and thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
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thanks so much for you neat comments!
pome lover
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a good entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 writing prompt. Dogs do love to roam. I hope this poem does well in the contest. Best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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This is a good entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 writing prompt. Dogs do love to roam. I hope this poem does well in the contest. Best of luck to you.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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than you so much!
Comment from DeboraDyess
Lol. I can see how that's the joke around town! I hate an old hunting dog who gets out and I'm the one hunting. lol. Same kind of dog, I'd guess.
Well done. Best of luck in the contest,
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Lol. I can see how that's the joke around town! I hate an old hunting dog who gets out and I'm the one hunting. lol. Same kind of dog, I'd guess.
Well done. Best of luck in the contest,
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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thanks, Deb
I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a funny entry for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 contest.
The picture is a great match as well.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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I think this is a funny entry for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 contest.
The picture is a great match as well.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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thanks, Sharon,
Glad you liked it.
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this with the animal poem about a bloodhound that refused to be found by its human.That is an interesting twist to the story. I guess you have done some hunting? Bill
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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I like this with the animal poem about a bloodhound that refused to be found by its human.That is an interesting twist to the story. I guess you have done some hunting? Bill
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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years ago but not with dogs.
thanks, Bill, for reading and commenting.
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not in years, Bill. It was dove hunting and we didn't have dogs. I just thought it was a humorous situation - a kind of turn about is fair play.
Katharine
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A wonderful entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.
Grandpa's old bloodhound is a good topic.
Good luck!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A wonderful entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice.
Grandpa's old bloodhound is a good topic.
Good luck!
Gypsy
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Many thanks, GBR :)
Appreciated!
Comment from Ogden
Yes, that would have been an ironic happenstance, especially if Grandpa and his bloodhound unexpectedly encountered each other while neither was consciously dealing with the disappearance.
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Yes, that would have been an ironic happenstance, especially if Grandpa and his bloodhound unexpectedly encountered each other while neither was consciously dealing with the disappearance.
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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wow! a double twist!
clever.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am loving the rhyming in this 5-7-5 that brought this picture to life as this dog goes missing and hides from its owners, a fun write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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I am loving the rhyming in this 5-7-5 that brought this picture to life as this dog goes missing and hides from its owners, a fun write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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thanks, Dolly.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Earl Corp
I don't think you need to explain the joke, I caught it and I'm not that bright. Kudos for writing a 5-7-5 poem that rhymes, makes sense, and is very funny. Loved the picture you used. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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I don't think you need to explain the joke, I caught it and I'm not that bright. Kudos for writing a 5-7-5 poem that rhymes, makes sense, and is very funny. Loved the picture you used. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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thanks, will delete explanation. Had a lady who didn't get it, so added it.
Thanks for your neat review and good wishes.
