senryu (walking with the moon)
The happiness of being in love.15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet senryu with romantic sentiments and I adored your presentation here, soothing, loving and promising as love grows beneath the stars, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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A sweet senryu with romantic sentiments and I adored your presentation here, soothing, loving and promising as love grows beneath the stars, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with some excellent imagery of being in love
in the moonlight, starry eyes, heartstrings.
Excellent presentation with picture and colors.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the senryu contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with some excellent imagery of being in love
in the moonlight, starry eyes, heartstrings.
Excellent presentation with picture and colors.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the senryu contest.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Eternal Muse
I love that entry. It's so poetically beautiful, with an award winning presentation, photo and font. This conjure up different images in a reader's mind, and your words take up to a perfect world of lovers and the moon.
Good luck in the contest, this has the makings of a winner.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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I love that entry. It's so poetically beautiful, with an award winning presentation, photo and font. This conjure up different images in a reader's mind, and your words take up to a perfect world of lovers and the moon.
Good luck in the contest, this has the makings of a winner.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reviewing! I love your optimism.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the effective use
of one continuous thought.
-A good topic and description.
-The imagery in each line
is very good, like, "walking with the moon."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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-Very nice artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the effective use
of one continuous thought.
-A good topic and description.
-The imagery in each line
is very good, like, "walking with the moon."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your comments - much appreciated.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from lancellot
A nice idea of two everlasting concepts in one poem. The moon is a reoccurring symbol that lasts forever, and for a loving couple to walk with it has the element of their loving also lasting forever.
Well done.
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A nice idea of two everlasting concepts in one poem. The moon is a reoccurring symbol that lasts forever, and for a loving couple to walk with it has the element of their loving also lasting forever.
Well done.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
