Forever the Hope
Every couples expectation is that they have a soulmate.2 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, those wedding rings - pledge of eternal love, faith and devotion. It's so beautiful, as are all weddings on a planet.
Alas, we watch what happens to those vows as the sands of time carve their way through.
A perfect entry for a senryu contest, in that senryu does require a satirical element. I love that picture, and that manicured nails (lol).
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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Oh, those wedding rings - pledge of eternal love, faith and devotion. It's so beautiful, as are all weddings on a planet.
Alas, we watch what happens to those vows as the sands of time carve their way through.
A perfect entry for a senryu contest, in that senryu does require a satirical element. I love that picture, and that manicured nails (lol).
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much for your read and review. Yes, sometimes that flow of sand gets bottled up.
Comment from lancellot
Very good. And I like the sentiment. Marriage isn't easy and love can be tricky in this world. Faith and hopefulness in a lasting love affair is what all newlyweds need.
A very good senryu.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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Very good. And I like the sentiment. Marriage isn't easy and love can be tricky in this world. Faith and hopefulness in a lasting love affair is what all newlyweds need.
A very good senryu.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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Thanks much for your read and encouraging comments.
