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Comment from John bailey
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I love the way you play with the words, perhaps, it's to late,, it is way to late. God will have his way with the earth, for the earth and all there in belongs to God.very good doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020
    I feel that with this gift to write.
    From the Mind, the Heart, and the Soul
    You learn quickly that you also can funnel it from above.
    In order to do that you have to Number One be me.
    Number two?
    You then get used to it cuz it's endless and it never stops.
    Sometimes I think of it is almost a torturing but I know it's beautiful.
    And, I'll take a break if I'm tired.
    And,just write the title and go to sleep.
    Thanks Again.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Humanity started with hunting and fishing - and look where we are now:

"Things like 9-11, WW III, Nuclear Alarm Ment, Social Distancing, with the Virgin Cornervirus C. O. V. I. D. - 19.
Pandemic Crisis.
(Death by Consumption!)
Is just a new Doorway to another World.
...
As we all gather at the river... "The River of No Return"
Will we all burn or learn?
But, perhaps it's already way too late? "




 Comment Written 15-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
    I like to think that heavenly father is giving us one more chance to wake up with this virus deal forcing us to stay at a distance or we will die from a disease that we deserve for raping and murdering our fellow man
    Thanks,
    Ricky
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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As we all do in some point in our existence. Nicely stated and i loved the thoughts in this one, thought it is shorter than you usually do. But to the point

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
    I could have been a so many more things into this I've actually wrote a piece that was presented to the White House keys poems when I was a member with the international society poetry 2005 and 2006.
    "Hell on Earth, Damn it to Shame!"
    (Is this Satan's Grimm Game?)
    Since I forgot to bring my peace poem from New Jersey I borrowed three magic markers from to Young aspiring poets who I bought their book of poetry and I went to the table .. (Parchment paper)
    and in a 2 by 3-foot section through the twin towers with the planes crashing and I went down the histories of the wars.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"
    According to C.Lucas.
    Charlie was known for his country western novels.
    He hasn't been around.
    And, I don't know if he died or what? But we communicated quite a few times.