Comment from Edward Escobar

Excellent

What an elegant way in joyfully putting such a wonderful verse that has that mood symbolism and the words that has image well linked that I see it all moving

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2020

Thanks very much for your intellect and also for your kind review Edward.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from John bailey

Excellent

Thank you doctor, for a loving moment,I to hope she had a perfect day. It is kind to see the other you. This poem was very nice. I like this to you. I

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2020

I traveled by bus and bicycle over the Donald Henderson bridge. (which was just reconstructed in the past 2 years)
As I get on Long Beach Island.
I set up and I start to write.
But only after I go and float in the ocean.
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Yes, and as lay my head down.
The water gently within my ears. And then I can come back and present.
Thanks again.
I'm trying to approach a new and interesting grieving level that's never been attained.
Thanks,
Ricky