Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I enjoyed this and I'm not a kid. I love the way you share a story in your poem. The use of dialogue works very well but you don't miss a beat - the rhyme is excellent. This is a fun and well written poem.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020

Thanks so very much........I am old and these little scribbles keep me sane....HaHa........Godspeed and Best Wishes......Stu Harrell

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fun inventive write as you threw yourselves into another world here filled with some unusual characters, this fantasy write takes us away from reality, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020

Thanks so much..I love some silliness here and there...Godspeed and Best Wishes......Stu Harrell