On The Wind
A cinquain contest offering13 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed reading your poem, it's really touching. I really like the first line "whispers choked in riot", that's a really cool
Image. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed reading your poem, it's really touching. I really like the first line "whispers choked in riot", that's a really cool
Image. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review, Oliver!
Comment from moonsunrise
What an amazing image for your cinquain poem. The tumultuous echoes of the wind in the distant recesses of one's mind.
I especially like the ending to your poem.
"in pained hearts masked in silence 'til
autumn"; just waiting for the beautiful fall season with a beautiful kaleidoscope of many colors.
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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What an amazing image for your cinquain poem. The tumultuous echoes of the wind in the distant recesses of one's mind.
I especially like the ending to your poem.
"in pained hearts masked in silence 'til
autumn"; just waiting for the beautiful fall season with a beautiful kaleidoscope of many colors.
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A cinquain contest offering
On the wind
Hello, my friend,
Great entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt contest. I'm not familiar with the form but I like yours. Beautiful presentation. I think this is about the George Floyd riots.
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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A cinquain contest offering
On the wind
Hello, my friend,
Great entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt contest. I'm not familiar with the form but I like yours. Beautiful presentation. I think this is about the George Floyd riots.
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful comments.
