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Comment from Brandi27
This poem was captivating throughout the entire story. I was so depressed by the ending. This would be what would happen if I ever tried to dive in the water to save someone only I wouldn't be able to save them either. I love how she prayed to God. Another great piece!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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This poem was captivating throughout the entire story. I was so depressed by the ending. This would be what would happen if I ever tried to dive in the water to save someone only I wouldn't be able to save them either. I love how she prayed to God. Another great piece!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Thank you Brandy and don't worry if you fell in?
I wouldn't drown saving you!
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed your poem. I love how you tell a story with your words. This is creative and enjoyable. And different from what I have read from you in the past. Great job.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed your poem. I love how you tell a story with your words. This is creative and enjoyable. And different from what I have read from you in the past. Great job.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2020
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Hi thanks Michael I am a master storyteller.
Doctor Ricky 1024