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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- quite a lot of heartache woven in here and, yet, the reader can also find hope in the 'floating'.... Interesting take on 'waves' in metaphor and reality... thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Wow -- quite a lot of heartache woven in here and, yet, the reader can also find hope in the 'floating'.... Interesting take on 'waves' in metaphor and reality... thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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When I work at the beach I go into the water I lay on my back set my ears going to water and listen to the sound feel the ocean and then it helps me when I want to write.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I like the bleak feeling in this poem. The first line is two sentences and needs a punctuation. I think 'waves of dresses' might sound better if it were 'wavey dresses.'
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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I like the bleak feeling in this poem. The first line is two sentences and needs a punctuation. I think 'waves of dresses' might sound better if it were 'wavey dresses.'
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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The fact that this is my poem means that I can create it anyway I like.
And you can review in any way you like it.
But I think it's much better than this.
Ricky