Comment from January L'Angelle

Excellent

Ricky my friend, I do so love your poems. They take me to such a deep place in my soul. I like that you feel as though you are caught within sin so much that no matter how hard you try all you taste is the waste of the sea. I think that we all feel that to some extent. It's so prophetic. The poem cuts right through my heart with a feeling of despair. I loved this poem. God bless you. -January L. :)

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020

Thanks so much January I'm glad you felt for this.
this is how I take my pain and dispersed it.
By journaling it and washing it away into the ocean.
Ricky

Comment from Brandi27

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem and could see myself in this situation. I can't swim very well so I would be lost in the endless waves. This gave great imagery. I could imagine the taste of salt water and could hear the foamy waves crashing on the shore.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020

Professional to be able to swim is not a gifted something that you learn.
it's not like writing is much with a pen it's more like learning how to hold a pen in your hand.
"She Waves for Me?"
Read my next election for the book and you'll fall in love and you'll learn how to swim!
Ricky