Sunlight and Shadow
The love affair of lifetimes...33 total reviews
Comment from R. Hiland
Well done, and fun. A couple of distressed stresses in Moonlight and coastlines which, in a minor way, disrupt the flow. And is portended a word? I suppose it is if it gets past a spellcheck. Anyway, fun stuff and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Well done, and fun. A couple of distressed stresses in Moonlight and coastlines which, in a minor way, disrupt the flow. And is portended a word? I suppose it is if it gets past a spellcheck. Anyway, fun stuff and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Mackenzie Schmidt
Your 20 line poem Sunlight and Shadows was a great contest entry. Your picture and bold color format helped elevate the poem. The only suggestion I would make is to classify the poem as nature poetry and not general.
Good Luck with the Contest!
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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Your 20 line poem Sunlight and Shadows was a great contest entry. Your picture and bold color format helped elevate the poem. The only suggestion I would make is to classify the poem as nature poetry and not general.
Good Luck with the Contest!
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Minglement
This is a stunning entry for the 20 line poem contest. What a beautiful concept, personification at its best, thinking of a romance between the sunlight and the shadows. Beautiful imagery, a real gem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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This is a stunning entry for the 20 line poem contest. What a beautiful concept, personification at its best, thinking of a romance between the sunlight and the shadows. Beautiful imagery, a real gem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Such a wonderful, WONDERFUL surprise this morning - THANK YOU! Those stars and your words are such a bright spot in the day here! Take care and have a Tremendous Tuesday!! 8-)
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Hi again - Well deserved, my dear friend. Take care - Hugs , Marcia
