Sunlight and Shadow
The love affair of lifetimes...33 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
I like the personification of Sunlight and Shadow in this poem. The metaphor of dancing for the movement of shadow and sun is an apt one.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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I like the personification of Sunlight and Shadow in this poem. The metaphor of dancing for the movement of shadow and sun is an apt one.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!!
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You are most kindly welcome.
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Comment from Ben Colder
Very nicely done. I was thinking of how darkness and light will never be the same. Darkness flees when light appears. Your stanzas are strong and very good. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Very nicely done. I was thinking of how darkness and light will never be the same. Darkness flees when light appears. Your stanzas are strong and very good. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Lobber
hi there,
I really like the poem. In a way it's almost too clever as we watch Sunlight, [who] does like to shine ~ And Shadow, she loves to follow his lead .... neat!
- Lobber
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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hi there,
I really like the poem. In a way it's almost too clever as we watch Sunlight, [who] does like to shine ~ And Shadow, she loves to follow his lead .... neat!
- Lobber
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Such a wonderful, WONDERFUL surprise this morning - THANK YOU! Those stars and your words are such a bright spot in the day here! Take care and have a Tremendous Tuesday!! 8-)
Comment from Sugarray77
Such a beautiful poem of contrasts and similes. I really enjoyed this poem and the wonderful presentation that you included in both font, layout and artwork. The content and rhyme choices were superb... I wish you luck!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Such a beautiful poem of contrasts and similes. I really enjoyed this poem and the wonderful presentation that you included in both font, layout and artwork. The content and rhyme choices were superb... I wish you luck!!
Melissa
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The glinting light among the trees has inspired this well written and rhymes write. Among the bright light and shadows a romantic view is pursued and enjoyed here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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The glinting light among the trees has inspired this well written and rhymes write. Among the bright light and shadows a romantic view is pursued and enjoyed here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Mary Furlong
A lovely poem on an interesting and vocative theme. It's common to say that opposites attract. Your highly original idea is that opposites support and enhance each other. Well done. Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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A lovely poem on an interesting and vocative theme. It's common to say that opposites attract. Your highly original idea is that opposites support and enhance each other. Well done. Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Mastery
Excellent writing author. I would be prepared to bet anything that this will be the poem of the month next month. It is absolutely beautiful in everyway, every line:
"or pride of the trees that they trim"
Good luck with it : ) Bob
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Excellent writing author. I would be prepared to bet anything that this will be the poem of the month next month. It is absolutely beautiful in everyway, every line:
"or pride of the trees that they trim"
Good luck with it : ) Bob
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Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
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Good job. : ) Bob
Comment from Gypsymooncat
I'd never before thought of sunlight and shadow as being "married" until now, but I kinda like the concept lol! This is a really grand, beautifully worded poem about that marriage and also, I'm guessing, about balance too. Without dark, there is no light, etc. I very much enjoyed this! Good luck in the contest xoxox
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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I'd never before thought of sunlight and shadow as being "married" until now, but I kinda like the concept lol! This is a really grand, beautifully worded poem about that marriage and also, I'm guessing, about balance too. Without dark, there is no light, etc. I very much enjoyed this! Good luck in the contest xoxox
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I just love this stanza, it's like a quick introspect between day and night, a metaphor about life and death:
Yea, bound in nature, Sunlight and Shadow ~
darkness and light, forever true...
May their rhythm inspire and captivate
'til sunlight bids your shadow adieu.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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I just love this stanza, it's like a quick introspect between day and night, a metaphor about life and death:
Yea, bound in nature, Sunlight and Shadow ~
darkness and light, forever true...
May their rhythm inspire and captivate
'til sunlight bids your shadow adieu.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did an excellent job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. The presentation is exquisite. Your topic is unique and expertly interpreted. I enjoyed reading it. Your image and color scheme are perfect choices together. I like the personification of the sun and shadow. Your rhymes and meter are great, too. This read well aloud and is a winner!
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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You did an excellent job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. The presentation is exquisite. Your topic is unique and expertly interpreted. I enjoyed reading it. Your image and color scheme are perfect choices together. I like the personification of the sun and shadow. Your rhymes and meter are great, too. This read well aloud and is a winner!
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
