Sunlight and Shadow
The love affair of lifetimes...33 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
This shadow must have come a long way to do all that. It is an interesting poem. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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This shadow must have come a long way to do all that. It is an interesting poem. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Raul!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-line poem celebrating twenty years of Fanstory, Sunlight and Shadow, has the required lines and tells the fanciful tale of light and shadow and how the casting of love makes the other appear.
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This twenty-line poem celebrating twenty years of Fanstory, Sunlight and Shadow, has the required lines and tells the fanciful tale of light and shadow and how the casting of love makes the other appear.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a lovely poem. I thoroughly enjoyed the story line. I like when "things" like sunlight and shadows are referred to as he and her. It gives the poem a feeling of life. I felt as if I were listening to a story about people doing amazing things. It was spectacular. Well done my friend. -January L. :)
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This is a lovely poem. I thoroughly enjoyed the story line. I like when "things" like sunlight and shadows are referred to as he and her. It gives the poem a feeling of life. I felt as if I were listening to a story about people doing amazing things. It was spectacular. Well done my friend. -January L. :)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from lyenochka
Such an artistic poem! In art, light and dark together are so much a part of how to render a picture realistically. You have shown us how the light and dark work so well together in life. Best wishes in the contest!
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Such an artistic poem! In art, light and dark together are so much a part of how to render a picture realistically. You have shown us how the light and dark work so well together in life. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great poem that seems to be a metaphor for two unique people with different personalities that are joined in marriage and have a blessed life together. Thanks for expressing your thoughts in this created way. Bill
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Great poem that seems to be a metaphor for two unique people with different personalities that are joined in marriage and have a blessed life together. Thanks for expressing your thoughts in this created way. Bill
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Such an awesome review, Bill, and those stars are such a welcome sight this evening - THANK YOU! So glad you enjoyed and found some hidden whispers here!! ;) :)
Comment from lancellot
This is a very beautiful poem. I enjoyed the alternating rhyme scheme and the telling of a story with Sunlight, Shadows. The personification of the two worked well and the presentation matched well too.
A great entry.
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This is a very beautiful poem. I enjoyed the alternating rhyme scheme and the telling of a story with Sunlight, Shadows. The personification of the two worked well and the presentation matched well too.
A great entry.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This poem is a good entry for the Celebrating 20 Years!: 20 Line Poem writing prompt. It is easy to read and understand. I think it should do well in the contest. Good luck!
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This poem is a good entry for the Celebrating 20 Years!: 20 Line Poem writing prompt. It is easy to read and understand. I think it should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Patty Palmer
I totally enjoyed your poem about Sunlight and Shadow! The rhyme and rhythm are perfect! It gave a bit of a fairy-like mood to the story. I swear I could almost see them flitting around together. Great job! I think you need six stars!
Patty
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I totally enjoyed your poem about Sunlight and Shadow! The rhyme and rhythm are perfect! It gave a bit of a fairy-like mood to the story. I swear I could almost see them flitting around together. Great job! I think you need six stars!
Patty
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Such a wonderful, WONDERFUL surprise this morning - THANK YOU! Those stars and your words are such a bright spot in the day here! Take care and have a Tremendous Tuesday!! 8-)
Comment from Boogienights
This paints a lovely picture of two opposing elements of nature, attracting one another. Complete opposites, yet working well together. If only that happened in human relationships. Best of luck in the contest.
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This paints a lovely picture of two opposing elements of nature, attracting one another. Complete opposites, yet working well together. If only that happened in human relationships. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The love affair of lifetimes...
Sunlight and Shadows
Hello, anonymous,
An interesting entry for the
Celebrating 20 Years!: 20 Line Poem writing prompt contest. Beautiful presentation. I like the topic of sunlight and shadows wedding. It's an unique idea. I had a hard time following the story within the poem. Well done overall.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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The love affair of lifetimes...
Sunlight and Shadows
Hello, anonymous,
An interesting entry for the
Celebrating 20 Years!: 20 Line Poem writing prompt contest. Beautiful presentation. I like the topic of sunlight and shadows wedding. It's an unique idea. I had a hard time following the story within the poem. Well done overall.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
