Comment from somedayOneday

Excellent

Very well put and with a message to all...Lust is for the insensitive and uncaring person who only wants to get a quick fix of sorts....Love is for the long term minded people who want to give all they have to another person ...but in order to obtain Love in its true form you must have sincerity and believe in one another.

A really great write that means so much.

With regards

Dave

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2006

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Excellent

hi Inner Sanctum

Short but definately not so sweet.

Some say lust is the first 'bud' that may evolve into love. But as you say at the end of this piece

With slow betrayal
Until one day
A wake up call
of rejection

I guess it is inevitable that we all fall prey, eventually.

hope you are well my friend?

Best wishes Peter

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2006

Comment from LarkSong

Excellent

Hi there...Wonderful, wonderful words with such deep meaning...The "wake up call" is so accurate...I really believe anything/everything that comes our way but we choose to ignore always comes back as a "wake up call" until we "get it"... Again, beautiful artwork...

Sincerely,
LarkSong

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2006

Comment from Margokatt

Excellent

fabulous! I would have liked a subtle rhyme here. . .because it would have increased the flow. . .i actually felt like it did rhyme a little. . .but the blue mood and the words were poignant and perhaps a little warning to a dear friend??? :) MK

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2006

Comment from Lizwriter

Excellent

Cynical, but oh, so true. I had just such an experience. This poem flows well and makes sense, too. Great job.
Lizwriter

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2006

Comment from ishta

Excellent

I wasn't sure what was central, just to ponder. Is it the lust of the flesh? It seems to be a few states of being, but still needs, in my opinion, something we can hold on to, no pun intended : ) I still think it's publishable (not a word), just the way it is.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2006

Comment from Trish4ever

Excellent

I found this poem to be short, sweet and true. Love doesn't come easy. Sometimes it doesn't come at all. Know that God will always love you and J.C as well. Take care and I really loved your poem. Sincerely, Trish4ever.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2006

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

lust and love get confused by some
for one is true and the other will make you come undone
this was a very well written piece of poetry
that was my pleasure to read and review... John

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2006