LOVE OF NATURE
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14 total reviews
Comment from UpNorth
And we are not born that way! Lots of wisdom in a few words. I like your graphic-it caught my eye and goes well with your ideas. Thank You for sharing this insight.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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And we are not born that way! Lots of wisdom in a few words. I like your graphic-it caught my eye and goes well with your ideas. Thank You for sharing this insight.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2020
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I agree. I think much of fear is non verbally modeled to children. Thanks for your pleasant review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
our authentic selves
sequestered by doubt and fear
Until we break loose
I would either capitalize all or leave the 'u' lower case unless you are making a point. Then tell me to mind my own business. LOL
Loved it, when we break loose, we can move on
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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our authentic selves
sequestered by doubt and fear
Until we break loose
I would either capitalize all or leave the 'u' lower case unless you are making a point. Then tell me to mind my own business. LOL
Loved it, when we break loose, we can move on
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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I would never tell you to MYOB, thanks for your review
Hugs, Trisha
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I would never tell you to MYOB, thanks for your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Eternal Muse
Excellent message, especially at a time like this. A superb quote by Gandhi. Superb artistic presentation and photo.
This should make a powerful entry in the contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Excellent message, especially at a time like this. A superb quote by Gandhi. Superb artistic presentation and photo.
This should make a powerful entry in the contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
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Thanks for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from zanya
This short format reminds us to be 'our authentic selves' rather than be 'sequestered by doubt and fear'- words of wisdom expressed eloquently here- alongside Gandhi quote
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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This short format reminds us to be 'our authentic selves' rather than be 'sequestered by doubt and fear'- words of wisdom expressed eloquently here- alongside Gandhi quote
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem conveys a powerful message about our power to escape our doubts and fears. So often we just don't realize we have the power.
Prayer helps! Your syllable count is 5 8 5.
Rating changed to 5 after correction made.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Your poem conveys a powerful message about our power to escape our doubts and fears. So often we just don't realize we have the power.
Prayer helps! Your syllable count is 5 8 5.
Rating changed to 5 after correction made.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Sorry you found this worth a 3, syllable count is corrected
Hugs, Trisha
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Sorry you found this worth a 3, syllable count is corrected
Hugs, Trisha
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I changed the rating to 5. In a very short poem, the syllable count being off really stands out.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Trisha.
-Effective imagery and
use of one continuous thought,
along with a good topic.
-I like the first line and the
message in your poem, too.
-The examples in line two are
also very good.
-You have 8 syllables in line two,
otherwise, it is a very good entry.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Trisha.
-Effective imagery and
use of one continuous thought,
along with a good topic.
-I like the first line and the
message in your poem, too.
-The examples in line two are
also very good.
-You have 8 syllables in line two,
otherwise, it is a very good entry.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
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You are welcome, Trisha.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about fear within our hearts we often hide and not everyone sees our fear until it all break loose wgen it get too much to hide away.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about fear within our hearts we often hide and not everyone sees our fear until it all break loose wgen it get too much to hide away.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Oscar J. Perez
Woo! I love this because ain't it the truth. It's so easy to fall into doubt and fear and that holds us back for a fact. As soon as we create a new mi date and get out of the doubt we realize we can achieve everything we believe.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Woo! I love this because ain't it the truth. It's so easy to fall into doubt and fear and that holds us back for a fact. As soon as we create a new mi date and get out of the doubt we realize we can achieve everything we believe.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thank you for a wonderful review. I?m glad you enjoyed reading my post
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Fearless and doubtless living is a meaningful living; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this 5-7-5 contest entry; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Fearless and doubtless living is a meaningful living; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this 5-7-5 contest entry; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a wonderful word: 'sequestered' it brings some magic to your poem here Trisha and I thought your 5-7-5 well written and a winner for me, I adore the sentiments too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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What a wonderful word: 'sequestered' it brings some magic to your poem here Trisha and I thought your 5-7-5 well written and a winner for me, I adore the sentiments too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
