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Faithfulness

a contest entry

9 total reviews 
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
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This is the first time I came to know about Pleiades poem. This poem is so beautiful because it all starts with F because He is our Heavenly Father. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-May-2021

reply by the author on 03-May-2021
    Thank you for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Teri7
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Portia, This is such a beautiful and well written true poem from your great big heart of love for our Lord, Jesus Christ! I miss seeing you on here. I hope and pray all is with with you and your family. May God bless and protect you all! love and Merry Christmas! Teri

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Teri,

    I am so sorry for the delay. Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.

    Hugs...Portia
Comment from MissMerri
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This is truly a beautiful poem, and so well constructed too. You've followed the restrictive rules without making anything in your content seem restricted. It flows smoothly and has so much meaning. I loved it. Oh, and congratulations for winning a prize too. Certainly deserved!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Miss Merri,


    Thanks so much for the outstanding review and six-star rating; they are greatly appreciated.

    I apologize for the late response; I have been away for quite a while due to health issues. Have a wonderful and blessed day.

    Portia
Comment from lyenochka
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Amen! "Flawless doctrine reveals faithfulness!" I love that statement. Great job with this pleiades poem. May we all be feasting on the Lord's Word and fervently seeking His strength and peace. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 02-May-2021
    Thanks my friend for the review and very kind comments.

    Love...Portia
Comment from Cindy Decker
Exceptional
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Portia,
A beautiful poem about God's Mercy, love and grace.
God is faithful to us. We need to embrace him completely. Exceptional work, Portia. You write so eloquently.
A friend,
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
    Cindy,

    Your review and comments made my day, thanks so much for your kindness and the six star rating. Have a great week.

    Love💖💖💖
    Portia
Comment from Dawn Munro
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What a truly lovely poem! I don't read a lot of poetry written in this style, but I am sure glad I didn't miss this one -- it inspires me to write one sometime! Very beautiful.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
    Dawn,

    Thank you kindly for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and six star rating. Have a great week.

    Hugs...Portia
reply by Dawn Munro on 21-Jul-2020
    Very much my pleasure, Portia.
Comment from joycetreasures
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Hi Portia,
This is such a lovely message about your title "Faithfulness." You used so many beautiful words that starts with a "F". Only if people would believe in the Almighty awesome power of God, things would change in their lives. This is such an awesome message of hope, love, mercy and grace waiting for those who get to know our Savior. Well done. Best of luck with this beautiful poem. You got my vote. Have a blessed day. Happy writing:-)

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
    Joyce,

    Thanks so much for your review, six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Thanks so much for your vote and blessings...

    Lots of love...Portia
reply by joycetreasures on 13-Jul-2020
    You are so welcome.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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How true these words are! This is a great and powerful entry for the Pleiades Poetry writing prompt. I hope this poem does well in the contest. Great good luck to you!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review.

    Blessings
Comment from prodigal
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Great is thy faithfulness, right?

Your poem reminded me of a lot of the feelings I had when I was religious.

Fervent, feasting, favor, flawless, these are well chosen, uncommon words, though they are a lot more common in religious writing.

I've seen several of these this morning. Contest entries. This is by far the best and I am zero percent religious. Fantastic poem!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
    Thank you kindly for your review.

    Blessings