Bridezilla and the Superglue
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
I love the ending. It brought a great smile for me and hopefully, the readers will be relieved as was I. The beginning sets the reader to be on the edge of their seat. This is well orchestrated. I am voting for this one.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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I love the ending. It brought a great smile for me and hopefully, the readers will be relieved as was I. The beginning sets the reader to be on the edge of their seat. This is well orchestrated. I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Spitfire
An interesting take on the prompt. Your dialogue is crisp and to the point. Funny line about being superglued to the man she's about to marry. I can visualize the entire wedding party going down the aisle without shoes.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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An interesting take on the prompt. Your dialogue is crisp and to the point. Funny line about being superglued to the man she's about to marry. I can visualize the entire wedding party going down the aisle without shoes.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hahaha! Good ending here! And a great fpash entry. Best of luck to you in the competition. Nothing I can see here to suggest you consider changing. Jan
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Hahaha! Good ending here! And a great fpash entry. Best of luck to you in the competition. Nothing I can see here to suggest you consider changing. Jan
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank our very much, Jan.
Comment from BethShelby
This is cute story. I hope the dresses didn't drag the ground too much. I can't imagine everyone being barefoot, but I guess that would work better that hobbling down the aisle with a broken heel.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This is cute story. I hope the dresses didn't drag the ground too much. I can't imagine everyone being barefoot, but I guess that would work better that hobbling down the aisle with a broken heel.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles to you Author, of how you ended the humorous, talk about the broken cheap wedding shoes. I wish the very best to you in contest prompt 'What Happened?'
I'm glad that I didn't break the heel off my wedding shoe
Gert
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Smiles to you Author, of how you ended the humorous, talk about the broken cheap wedding shoes. I wish the very best to you in contest prompt 'What Happened?'
I'm glad that I didn't break the heel off my wedding shoe
Gert
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much! How kind.
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You are so welcome.
Gert
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a cute story entry for the What Happened? writing prompt. A barefoot bride! ha ha. I think it should do well in the contest. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This is a cute story entry for the What Happened? writing prompt. A barefoot bride! ha ha. I think it should do well in the contest. Best of luck!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, it's funny now, but not at the time apparently. Your image plus your words match perfectly. Good job with the contest prompt. I like the dialogue, too. Thanks for sharing nd best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Haha, it's funny now, but not at the time apparently. Your image plus your words match perfectly. Good job with the contest prompt. I like the dialogue, too. Thanks for sharing nd best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from emmaysavage
I enjoyed this story; I kind of hope it's true. You handled the dialog well -- It came across spontaneous and natural. I've known worse bridezillas.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed this story; I kind of hope it's true. You handled the dialog well -- It came across spontaneous and natural. I've known worse bridezillas.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your review.
Comment from humpwhistle
Ah, there's solution to every problem. People have been getting married barefoot for centuries. Nice use of dialogue. Very concise and readable. I wish you the best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Ah, there's solution to every problem. People have been getting married barefoot for centuries. Nice use of dialogue. Very concise and readable. I wish you the best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Lee.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is a very very funny little story that thoroughly entertained us. It's also very captivating and held our attention throughout. The picture accompanying this is adorable. The last two lines are priceless. This is an exceptional entry. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This is a very very funny little story that thoroughly entertained us. It's also very captivating and held our attention throughout. The picture accompanying this is adorable. The last two lines are priceless. This is an exceptional entry. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
