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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "At the Proper Time"An artful mix of poetic forms.
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Comment from Jerome Goldberg
Janet - you picked a very emotion intensive topic and summarized it very well within the five - seven - five poem limitations. Good luck in the contest. Regards, Jerry
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Janet - you picked a very emotion intensive topic and summarized it very well within the five - seven - five poem limitations. Good luck in the contest. Regards, Jerry
Comment Written 12-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Jerry. I hope you are staying well and safe. Smiles, Janet
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very witty entry in this contest, with a superb artistic presentation and picture. Some interesting thoughts. I especially liked the message in line 3.
Thank for sharing it with us, good luck in the booths!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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A very witty entry in this contest, with a superb artistic presentation and picture. Some interesting thoughts. I especially liked the message in line 3.
Thank for sharing it with us, good luck in the booths!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your comments and good wishes!
Comment from patcelaw
This is well written and the scripture passage is one I remember when I feel I want to take vengeance on someone.
Another verse that goes along with this one is that God Himself will heap colas of fire upon their heads when they mess with His children.
Patricia
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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This is well written and the scripture passage is one I remember when I feel I want to take vengeance on someone.
Another verse that goes along with this one is that God Himself will heap colas of fire upon their heads when they mess with His children.
Patricia
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Patricia. I appreciate your review and additional scripture reference. Blessings, my friend!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow -- that pretty much says it all there, doesn't it? Not sure I'd go at it from a revenge standpoint rather than simply there is always a 'bill' that comes due in the end... :/ :/ Great presentation with this one, Janet -- thanx for sharing and best of luck!! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Wow -- that pretty much says it all there, doesn't it? Not sure I'd go at it from a revenge standpoint rather than simply there is always a 'bill' that comes due in the end... :/ :/ Great presentation with this one, Janet -- thanx for sharing and best of luck!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Yvette. I truly appreciate your review. This is how Just Punishment is described on Google: Just punishment is deserved punishment. In order to deserved to be punished, the offender must have committed an offence that is morally accepted as an offence. -- Since God is perfect, holy, an can never do anything wrong, I believe it when He says he will exact just punishment for such horrible wrongdoings like killing innocent children and others in drive-by shootings. If He wants to call it revenge, then it has to be an okay thing. I just wish drive-by shooters would take a look at President Lincoln's Second Inaugural Address--" With malice toward none with charity for all.." I once saw somebody immediately after being wounded in a drive-by shooting and, thankfully, the bullet didn't hit her little boy whose hand she was holding. At least it only grazed her leg. The woman was wearing a skirt and there was a lot of blood. I am sure it is something that little boy will never forget. So sad!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are strong, clear, descriptive and creative. I thought
about counting on God through difficult situations and he always comes
through. The poem flows and connects well. I like the title of this poem!
Have a great weekend!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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The author's words are strong, clear, descriptive and creative. I thought
about counting on God through difficult situations and he always comes
through. The poem flows and connects well. I like the title of this poem!
Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Thank you greatly, Maria. Your review is an uplift and much appreciated! Smiles, Janet
Comment from The Death
I liked how you used this short space to highlight a social issue. Nice choice of using the word "trolling." Adds a different perspective. The presentation matches the theme the well. Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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I liked how you used this short space to highlight a social issue. Nice choice of using the word "trolling." Adds a different perspective. The presentation matches the theme the well. Good luck!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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I have been close by with children to a drive-by shooting. Even when no one is killed, it is a horrible thing. I appreciate your review and good wishes very much!
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello Spangle,
I like your 5-7-5 poem. I do we all will reap what we sow. Sow good seeds and you will receive good seeds. I concur with you that drive by shooters are cowards. They aren't man or woman enough to face their victims. Nicely done. Thanks
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Hello Spangle,
I like your 5-7-5 poem. I do we all will reap what we sow. Sow good seeds and you will receive good seeds. I concur with you that drive by shooters are cowards. They aren't man or woman enough to face their victims. Nicely done. Thanks
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Your positive review is truly appreciated. Thank you so much!
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You are welcome.
Comment from TPAC
I agree such an incident is cold hearted, parallel to cops killing an unarmed man, balancing I figure Satan rules hell. All stated in my given viewpoint prevailing this particular read. All stated in my viewpoint.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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I agree such an incident is cold hearted, parallel to cops killing an unarmed man, balancing I figure Satan rules hell. All stated in my given viewpoint prevailing this particular read. All stated in my viewpoint.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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There's a lot of darkness in this world. It's hard to keep up with it all. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts about this posting!
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Cowardice vs Courageous. It's all in the mind of how one see's themselves. Some see the same with their eye's open as they do with them closed. Very sad. Nice job and Good Luck with your 5-7-5 entry.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Cowardice vs Courageous. It's all in the mind of how one see's themselves. Some see the same with their eye's open as they do with them closed. Very sad. Nice job and Good Luck with your 5-7-5 entry.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Thank you kindly for your wise comments. I appreciate your reading this short posting and the the good wishes as well! :-)
Comment from Aussie
Cowards indeed. They hide in cars and alleyways, kill innocent people and then run away. The world will have no peace until the Lord takes His vengeance. Well done friend.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Cowards indeed. They hide in cars and alleyways, kill innocent people and then run away. The world will have no peace until the Lord takes His vengeance. Well done friend.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Your comments holds a lot of truth, Kay. This world has too much darkness going on right now...and it does not seem to be getting any better. Thankfully, we can look upward and delight in the Lord's goodness and loving care. xoxo
