Unsettled Mind
Remembering the crash of past unpleasant times.2 total reviews
Comment from roof35
The illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for the words that follow. This is a good image for "memories crashing." This is very nicely done.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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The illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for the words that follow. This is a good image for "memories crashing." This is very nicely done.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from Beverly A McBride
Nice job. Fulfills the syllable requirement. The picture nicely complements the poem. The picture is excellent in color, detail, even the movement in the water. The allusion to waves crashing is spot on for this poem. Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Nice job. Fulfills the syllable requirement. The picture nicely complements the poem. The picture is excellent in color, detail, even the movement in the water. The allusion to waves crashing is spot on for this poem. Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your read and encouraging comments.
