Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Interesting take on the lights that shine on our streets at night. I would not have thought of them in such a fashion but now that you have given me vision I see it.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020

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Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is an interesting entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt.
The lovely picture is a good match.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello my friend

A fine entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. The presentation is nice. The connection between lines is good.

I like the nightlights topic.

Peace be with you.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020

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Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Interesting play on words, i live in the city, you gave me a new perspective on city lights. A fun read, great picture, proper syllable count, no reader could ask for more. Excellent entry and good luck.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2020

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Comment from Brandi27

Excellent

I love the way the city lights are being described as knights that are watching over the people and the city at night. So little words but it tells a whole story.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2020

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Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is a nice play on words. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your clever poem. You said a lot in a few words. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2020

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Within the darkness there is treachery and danger, the light offers us protection as we can see and protect ourselves, exposing danger is the best way of avoiding it, of course you said it all in fewer words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2020

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Comment from amada

Excellent

This is a cleverly written 2-3-2 poem. It's great that you found a correlation between nights and knights and brought it all together. The result is a very sweet to the heart and the ears poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2020

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Comment from A Little Bird

Excellent

Congratulations on this well-written piece. A possible improvement would be making your punctuation in terms of capital letters a little less erratic. Stay healthy and safe during these difficult times! Good luck with the competition!

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2020

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Brilliant play of night's knights with the rhyming lights and the tie-in to protector. Masterful work in five words--one star for each! Good luck. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2020

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