Regrets
2/3/2 poem3 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
It is amazing how much you say in these three lines of six words! Your title and evocative sculpture establish the mood perfectly as well. Best wishes in the 2-3-2 Poetry contest- Joan
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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It is amazing how much you say in these three lines of six words! Your title and evocative sculpture establish the mood perfectly as well. Best wishes in the 2-3-2 Poetry contest- Joan
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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My friend, I am glad that you like the write; thank you and God bless.
Comment from LisaMay
I like the sentiment expressed in your poem, but as soon as i saw it i thought of a word that would rhyme and still fit the meaning. As a suggestion, how about:
Life's fate:
too little,
too late.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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I like the sentiment expressed in your poem, but as soon as i saw it i thought of a word that would rhyme and still fit the meaning. As a suggestion, how about:
Life's fate:
too little,
too late.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Hello Lisa and thank you so much for the wonderful suggestion and I'd definitely change it; however, now I have to wait as the time has expired to make any changes; still, I love it and I'll do it once the voting is done; I appreciate your time and the excellent review; thank you.
Comment from Simone John-Vanderpool
At first this poem seems to be a simple collection of words, but as I read and re-read it, I feel like its meaning evolves. There is such a profound truth in the idea that life always turns up skeletons in everyone's closet, and this even causes me to wonder if the negative connotation of the term "skeletons in the closet" is perhaps misapplied. Skeletons are just a part of the cycle of life and death! Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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At first this poem seems to be a simple collection of words, but as I read and re-read it, I feel like its meaning evolves. There is such a profound truth in the idea that life always turns up skeletons in everyone's closet, and this even causes me to wonder if the negative connotation of the term "skeletons in the closet" is perhaps misapplied. Skeletons are just a part of the cycle of life and death! Well done!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Hello friend and thank you kindly for your time and the wonderful insights.
