Sid
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Comment from lyenochka
Nicely done 5-7-5 with LOTS of alliteration and humor. I like the conclusion that Sid Snake is enjoying a serpent sonata. Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Nicely done 5-7-5 with LOTS of alliteration and humor. I like the conclusion that Sid Snake is enjoying a serpent sonata. Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Thank you, lyenochka.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a cute entry for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 Contest.
This is a good match for the amazing picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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I think this is a cute entry for the Witty Animal 5-7-5 Contest.
This is a good match for the amazing picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thanks, Sharon
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Excellent entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. Nice presentation.
I loved to watch fakirs and their snakes when I was little.
Well done!
Peace be with you,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend
Excellent entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. Nice presentation.
I loved to watch fakirs and their snakes when I was little.
Well done!
Peace be with you,
Gypsy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you, GBR
Comment from Cindy Decker
A nice alliteration poem. I often wondered if snakes could really hear sounds without ears, or if it's the vibration of the flute that attracts them.
Good last line about the serpent sonata. Excellent befitting poem.
Have a good weekend.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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A nice alliteration poem. I often wondered if snakes could really hear sounds without ears, or if it's the vibration of the flute that attracts them.
Good last line about the serpent sonata. Excellent befitting poem.
Have a good weekend.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Cindy
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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an unusual thought for the Witty animal 5-7-5 writing prompt entry. It is easy to read and understand, and I think it should do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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This is an unusual thought for the Witty animal 5-7-5 writing prompt entry. It is easy to read and understand, and I think it should do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
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Thank you, TT
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile and I wonder why snakes enjoy the music so much, they just love to dance like the rest of us I expect, a fun post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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This made me smile and I wonder why snakes enjoy the music so much, they just love to dance like the rest of us I expect, a fun post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from SixFtLion (Suzanna)
I enjoyed your 5-7-5 poem, very creative to write about a dancing snake. Also, you chose an awesome graphics that complements your awesome poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed your 5-7-5 poem, very creative to write about a dancing snake. Also, you chose an awesome graphics that complements your awesome poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Thank you, SFL
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightfully clever--masterful alliteration in FF and SSSSS==thus one per your well-earned stars. The imagery is startling and fresh--serpent sonata. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Delightfully clever--masterful alliteration in FF and SSSSS==thus one per your well-earned stars. The imagery is startling and fresh--serpent sonata. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Liz
Comment from roof35
EEK! This gives me the creeps just looking at it on the screen. I cannot imagine being there. However, your illustration pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your well written poem. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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EEK! This gives me the creeps just looking at it on the screen. I cannot imagine being there. However, your illustration pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your well written poem. Nicely done.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Thanks, roof, for the great review.
Comment from emmaysavage
The syllable count lyrical, not awkward. To make a snake amusing is not so easy but you did it. The poem seems to flow right out of your image. Good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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The syllable count lyrical, not awkward. To make a snake amusing is not so easy but you did it. The poem seems to flow right out of your image. Good luck!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2020
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Thanks, emmay, for the great review.
