Fourth of July
Remembering a firefighter on the fourth of July.3 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I'm so sorry for your loss, Laurie dear. Losses do have a tendency to saddened the holiday, especially when the person is loved so much. A deep void exsists. Still, we must carry on. I lost my oldest granddaughter and miss here every time our family gathers. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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I'm so sorry for your loss, Laurie dear. Losses do have a tendency to saddened the holiday, especially when the person is loved so much. A deep void exsists. Still, we must carry on. I lost my oldest granddaughter and miss here every time our family gathers. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 18-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020
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Wow, Sally. I can't even imagine the pain of losing a grandchild. I'm so sorry. Thank you for reviewing my work, and please know that this morning my thoughts are on you and your family.
Comment from roof35
This is a lovely tribute to a fallen hero. Your short poem manages to show your sadness. Your illustration is unique and pairs perfectly. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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This is a lovely tribute to a fallen hero. Your short poem manages to show your sadness. Your illustration is unique and pairs perfectly. Nicely done.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Thanks for your review! So appreciated.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
At the instance of violation of human rights, right to freedom, there is no use of celebration of 4th of July; rather it is sheer loss of time; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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At the instance of violation of human rights, right to freedom, there is no use of celebration of 4th of July; rather it is sheer loss of time; enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this; wish you good luck in the contest. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2020
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Exactly. I wanted originally to write this as if to America, but then switched my focus to a fallen firefighter, maybe to couch my anger at my country these days. Thanks for your review, and your insight.